Date: September 24 2015 11:33 AM Title: Momma's Boy
Plez keep going, and please make the next chapter "playful"... XD
Date: May 24 2014 1:14 PM Title: Conflict of Interests
PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING THIS STORY
[Report This]Date: October 10 2013 5:16 PM Title: Momma's Boy
Love it! Please continue! Please have the mother's domination be light, seductive, teasing and not mean and cruel.
[Report This]Date: September 30 2013 6:45 PM Title: Momma's Boy
I hope you update again soon. I also hope andrew regrets it, it is his mom after all. I also hope she doesn't care. Really great story, just could use more abuse I guess.
Date: August 22 2013 8:29 AM Title: Momma's Boy
Some Butt or vore would be really awesome :)
[Report This]Date: August 19 2013 8:35 PM Title: Momma's Boy
Mamma Mia! That's a-lotta!
More than one boy can handle, for sure.... ;`)
Author's Response:
It is a lot I must agree, but who cares?
Certainly not me :P
Date: August 05 2013 6:54 PM Title: Conflict of Interests
Abusive but with conflict and guilt at the end
Date: August 05 2013 1:17 AM Title: Adjusting
Playful
Excellent addition. I hope she stays playful for a good long while.
[Report This]Date: August 05 2013 1:09 AM Title: Conflict of Interests
Well i like the approach of her starting playful and her also having doubts and limitations about using him, but at the same time having this voice in the back of her head which wants her to really abuse him with no limit.
So for now i would also go with playful, but leaning more to abusive already than in the previous chapter.
Date: August 04 2013 3:00 PM Title: Adjusting
Playful, but more naughty if you would :)
[Report This]Date: August 04 2013 2:33 PM Title: Adjusting
This is really good, I like what you've done so far, and I don't think that I'll vote. Your idea's will ultimately be the best ones, and I can't wait to see what happens next in this fantasy. Just take it 'SLOWLY', and allow the 'fear', and 'suspence' , to build-up as he realizes his new place in this gigantic new world....
Take your time, ;`)
Date: August 04 2013 8:45 AM Title: Adjusting
Please be playful all around I can find abusive anyware. Some insertion and breast themes would be nice, like he would be more confortable if he lived in her vagina than in a sock at night, or under her foot when she walks, this way her pheromones can seduce him into likeing his situation. I always when the tinies literaly live inside the women relying on their natural chemicals, "like cum and brest milk for nurishment".
[Report This]Date: August 04 2013 4:19 AM Title: Adjusting
Great footplay. I found it strange that he didn't noticed her fingering herself. If he would be aware of her masturbating that might have filled his head with even more weird feelings... to know his mother was THAT sexual aroused, that he was not alone with these "wrong" feelings.
my vote: PLAYFUL
And maybe a suggestion: not going for the hardcore stuff right away. Body exploration of her soft stomach and breasts. (breasts still in the bra.)
Author's Response: His vision was kind of blocked by a huge toe and so was his attention. Yeah, it's hard to notice things like that when something like that distracts you.
Date: August 04 2013 4:03 AM Title: Adjusting
playful or abusive?
Uhhh... both
Author's Response: It can be done...
[Report This]Date: August 04 2013 2:27 AM Title: Adjusting
Playful.
But if it's insertion then cruel.
aaron
PS great chapter btw.
Author's Response: Can do!
[Report This]Date: July 20 2013 6:49 AM Title: Conflict of Interests
Another vote for gentle!
I've been thinking about it, if you make her a cruel giantess... a goddess dominating, humiliating, torturing her "slave", then it diminishes incestual aspect.
Incest is only kinky if it is with consent of the two people, otherwise it is just plain rape IMO.
Keep it focussed on a maternal gentle relationship. This doesn't mean that there can't some cruelty... in fact it would make those rare acts of cruelty all the more interesting if afterward:
"Mom... WHY WHY WHY did you do that to me?"
Make her sometimes lose her self control, and let her sane self deal with the messy situations that have occured.
I am not judging people for preferring cruel giantesses, but come on, there are already so many stories like that. And we barely have gentle giantesses.
(This also goes for foot fetsish. :D Already enough stories about.)
And this was a really great start to the story. Great set up.
I rate only 4 stars.
You want an extra star? CONTINUE THIS!
;) :D
Author's Response:
Continue I will. And forget 'cruel' I gotta go rewrite that. Think more...
Abusive or Playful.
not Gentle or Cruel.
[Report This]Date: July 13 2013 2:38 AM Title: Conflict of Interests
I personally think the best way to approach this story would be to have Lauren purposely create situations where she "accidentally" does things to Andrew. For example she could pretend she doesnt see him and then step on him etc. As the story progresses and she becomes more and more comfortable with treating her son as a toy, thats went she becomes more aggressive towards him. The problem you have at the moment is that youve made her too overprotective and to just make her switch to a violent character wouldnt be believable in my opinion. At the moment its a very interesting story though and I will be looking forward to updates.
Author's Response:
Exactly! Someone gets it! That's what I've been trying to communicate! Now you are right in the too overprotective fact, but I've got that _mostly_ worked out to be fixed.
Thanks for an insightful review!
Date: July 11 2013 9:25 PM Title: Conflict of Interests
I'd prefer if Lauren went wild with her sexual instinct and dominated her son, especially if her son was aroused against his will and she teased him about it while still being rough with him.
I'd also enjoy if there were gentle chapters later on where she explains and somewhat regrets her actions and they maybe come to an agreement and play around some more.
I think the first scenario is more arousing but the second is also hot and makes the story more bearable for scared masochists like myself who dislike when the larger party is cruel all the way to the end of a story.
I'm interested in incest stories so whatever you go with I'll be reading it.
Author's Response:
I'll see about that. Thanks for your input it will be considered and probably used. Really, all this is influencing the ending and as the chapters go on, I'll make sure to have the story drop a hint on what the next chapter will be so all you readers can ponder what you would prefer. Also, it's really a majority vote so if I get more cruel recommendations than gentle I'll make the next one cruel. But also it IS possible to do what you said and maybe mix it up with regret and stuff. It all depends on how you want the scenario to play out.