Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2015 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ok Crocodile.  I stick with it. ;) :)

I like how this world works. Because it's believable if 1% of the population shrinks to that height. The disturbing part is that the mother lets someone so much younger and not fully matured take care of him. If you do that as a parent, you break the selfconfidance of a child/young adult that is already brittle in his shrunken state. With a strong character who doesn't break, he or she will become hatefull. The other disturbing part is that Wendy seems like a nice girl with the best intentions and is put in that position. She has no concept of what it's like to be a 20 year old shrunken person. Her so called good intentions only anger and hurt everyone who was in that postition. No one will accept life lessons from a 14 year old. An unhealthy situation.

There are all sort of possible outcomes.

Author's Response:

Indeed you are very correct about every statement and observation that you just made.   And that's exactly why I chose those conditions to explore!   I don't see a lot of things working out here much to both of their consternations or sorrows.

I do hope that it does continue to provide interesting and stimulating reading for the viewer however.  The outcomes are endless indeed, but I have a particular one in mind with a determination to see this story through to it's end. 

Thanks for your pledge to stick it out with this story and please continue to review it!

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12 2015 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 7

Good story. If Tim plays it smart. He can get out of this. If I was betrayed in that manner, it would be all out mental warfare. He has nothing to lose now. Even death is better than this. There are so many tactics he could use and they would all work if he is committed enough and smart enough. But he doesn't seem smart enough because he was surprised that that suit was a trap. He's doomed. ;)

 

 

Author's Response:

When we win some and we lose some too... It's when we win that's most important if feel. :)

Thank you for the inspirational review Barrowman.  I think you might like where this is heading in the long run so please stick it out with me. ;)

Reviewer: BrittanyB Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2015 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very good

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot Bittany!!!

Reviewer: Tigernach Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2014 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 6

This story seems incomplete.

Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2014 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 6

I hope some day this keeps going because it's really an amazing story and really well written.

Reviewer: Snowball Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 6

Credit where credit is due!! This was an excellent chapter; I thought it might be helpful for us readers to know what was in Tim’s mother’s letter, thank you for including it. Perhaps Wendy might end up being the friend Tim needs rather than the monster she was in the last chapter. If she is reasonable Tim will not have to use the nuclear option that he now knows he has. If Tim is forced to use his intelligence Wendy cannot win. History has taught us brute force never succeeds for long. Sun Tzu wrote at length about how these battles are won and lost. His mother has obviously adopted Machiavelli’s The Prince Strategy of over reach and sacrifice with Wendy as an instrument of overreach to achieve her goal. By using Wendy to make draconian demands on Tim, the fundamental plan would be to metaphorically behead Wendy to receive voluntary concessions from Tim. Hopefully Wendy will not fall into this trap and might navigate a new course that will improve Tim's life. If Wendy can act as an impartial arbitor your story can take some unexpected twists and my make this tale fascinating on a level that transcends masterbatory fantasy.

 

Tim should be encouraged to matriculate in on-line classes and to prepare himself for an adult life.  Wendy could guide him in this endeavour, and can be persuaded to be reasonable with him.  His mother has a history of selfishly blaming Tim for her failed marriage and does not have his best interests actually at heart, while she indulges his laziness and self-pity.  Their relationship is long-standing unhealthy.  If Wendy could grow up to be a real girlfriend, growing into a helpmeet, she could educate herself to actually be of service to little people and love him completely as well.  This could indeed be a true fairy tale romance.

Keep up the good work!

 

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 6

Whoa!  A 63' - 'cherry condition'-  Chevy Nova? / 

Wendy is turning out to be a great giantess,  can't wait to see her turn a little playful, and get carried away with herself...  :`)

Author's Response:

Yep, Just about all of it is original too.  The tires are magged out though and a lot fatter than the factory ones were but you can't skimp out on the tires I'm afraid. The floor plates were replaced due to rust but that's to be expected due to the salting of roads during winter months.  My wife wanted to know where the air conditioner was and I pointed her to the fan knob...  So yeah, if you want some luke warm air pushed through the vents then that's the air conditioning you'd better be ready for in that old lady. Ha, ha, ha.

And yeah, Wendy is a monster and doesn't even know it yet so you might be pleased with what's coming down the pike.. Thanks a lot for the words Wildcatman.. I'll be reading your newest chapter tonight as well and can't wait to see what you came up with here lately.

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2013 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 5

Read the last few chapters an I must say that I love this story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot Aaron!  I think you'll like what's coming down the pike and thanks again for nice words. :)

I'm working on the next chapter as I type this, literally. ;)

Reviewer: pasret4 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12 2013 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 3

I have to agree with wildcatman, your descriptions for the characters are very detailed. And the story is leading off with a good start, I look forward to reading more chapters of this good story. Keep up the good work!!

Author's Response:

I'll try to do just that Pasret4.  And I'll try to have an other chapter up tonight so please stand by and thank you very much for the comments!  ;)

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2013 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 3

Just read the entire story. You go into depth which is rare to see. I wonder if Tim will get used to Wendy. Cannot wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much for reading my story .. I really appreciate your effort to do such!!.

Yes, I wonder if those two will ever get used to each other as well. ;)