I'm glad you liked this chapter.. This story is intended to go all over the place and not be limited to a bedroom.   So be prepared for a lot of twists and turns. :)

I'd would agree with you on every point that you made Barrowman.    I think Tim is very lucky in the respect of meeting somebody his first hour out of the house.  As I'm well aware of the old axiom, of - The problem with running, is that you eventually find out that there's nowhere to run to.

I agree with you about being missing is worse than being dead.  With a death at leat you know.  Tim's going to have problems of his own soon enough but he will have to toughen up a bit if he's going to survive in this new world that he finds himself in.   And yes, some things will have to be dispersed with. The sooner the better. :)

I should have some more soon Barrowman.

Thanks a lot for the vote to realism Takuoni!

Thank you for writing a review Moonpie... Love your name. :)

I'm in complete agreement with you about our governments overstepping their bounds in the attempt to become the surrogate parents of a race of people who no longer need any such thing. I could go off on a very long diatribe about such manners and tend to do so but will spare the readers the boredom as I know they don't want to get their political science from me. he, he.

I had a very nice sophisticated response to your question as to why I picked 3 inches but the page silently logged me out so when I tried to post it, thereby barring me and therefore lost the response totally. Let me see if I can try again.... I chose that size for the following reasons as it is not my favorite height either... When a beer brewery chooses a signature lager (although this is not so much the case these days as it used to be) they attempt to smooth out the peaks and valleys of that taste at the expense of losing the more cultured palates to the blanded taste buds of the masses in the interests of maximizing profits knowing full well that they could make a better beer if they so chose to do so but default to the former for monetary concerns.

Now, I've heard some writers here state that they write for themselves.. And that's fine for them and I wish them the best of luck with that philosophy too. But I've come to believe that I'm writing more for the reader than for myself to the extent or ratio that I give them the best of what they want yet keeping enough independence to not give them only what they want which I believe ultimately yields you a better product than the inverse method that many writers insist upon which I diverge from. Perhaps there's a metaphysical reason pertaining to service to self and service to others which if I go to deeply into may hurt some feelings amongst my contemporaries so will ask you to forgive me for not divulging further into that hint.

As to Wendy's age I chose 14 because that is typically (although not always) when a female begins to show her flowers which means that she has the equipment but does not yet possess the experience or wisdom to use it properly, which typically leads to many mistakes which our protagonist must endure leading us to an abundance of poor choices that give us the travesties which I'm all to happy to pick and choose from.

This was another great review from you Barrowman! I truly appreciate your bravery in doing such if going by the viewership to review ratios are sadly any true measure to go by.

I truly look forward to your next one!

Thanks for the words Barrowman. I'm glad that it's giving you some anger. The best stories always seem to anger their readers in some way. :)

Personally I try to never make a fetish story. That's pretty much a one dimensional ploy that doesn't ever lead anywhere. And get's boring in a fraction of that time. Those kind of stories dd have their place and time howerver.. I'm just not in to them anymore or have been for going on decades now.

I think if the person approaches things from the attitude of "I'm expressing myself artistically and I plan on writing a story that just so happens to have an altered size ratio theme to boot, then the chips may fall randomly and make for much more entertainment for the reader and writer alike.

Thanks again Barrowman!