Congratulations on posting what was quite possibly the most demented and twisted story I've ever read on here. A shrunken woman is just about the most helpless thing imaginable, but when you combine that with her being pregnant it makes her all the more vulnerable. So I think I can see where you were going with that, and I think you accomplished it. But as gerald said, probably would have been nice if there were some sort of plot to it, and you could have made it longer. Obviously this woman is dead, but perhaps there are others? It would be interesting to figure out how she came to be shrunken and end up in such an unlikely place as this.

If she became pregnant obviously there is some male who impregnated her, so where is he? I can't say I'm a fan of M/M content, but if you had his mother find the shrunken man who impregnated the woman that might be cool to read whatever she does with him.

Also, btw you should post this over on the Violent SW forum, because the people there appreciate stuff like this. Its a pretty dead place, but contributions like this can help give it some life.

The story feels largely pointless - he could have just as well dissected a frog or a mouse. We can assume all living things feel pain and some form of fear - there's hardly any difference from a human in such context.

Decent first story - but for me, the point of a GT*/S* is that she can dominate (even unwillingly - a gentle GT* is still extremely overpowering) a being that understands it, that can talk back - or at least understand given messages and requests (whether he/she listens to them or not is another matter) - and have emotions about what is happening, what the giant/ess is doing... I mean - what's the point of imagining a scenario where somebody breaks a living doll without even realizing what is happening? Just some empty unaware violence - virtually meaningless, that's all. The mentally challenged part was fairly original, but again - I simply fail to see the point.

I think it might have been better if he wasn't plain dumb, but rather affected by some PDD - autism/asperger perhaps. Still very awkward and possibly violent - but inspiring imagination to some larger extent.

Just my random thoughts - no offense or anything. Oh, and one more thing - a plot wouldn't be bad either.

Author's Response:

Of course, no offense taken. I personally think it is immensely interesting when the dominating party does not exactly know what is going on. I really enjoy it when they are clueless, and haven't a clue that, for example, what they have in their hand is, for example, a human being. A matter of life and death, put in the hands of one with the mind of an extremely young child, leads to very interesting results. The giant does not know what is being done; a human woman is being brutally slaughtered by his very own hands. And he believes that, in all honesty, he is helping the poor creature; the thought of such a scenario is extremely appealing to me, and I can understand why some might not get it.