I didn't find this funny so one star.

JK it was hilarious and accurate as fuck. Though I have to say at 17 (and now) if a cute girl invited me back to her house I probably wouldn't care about her intentions much either. Maybe I'm too trusting. Either way, this was genius.

This is so bad it's great. I was laughing through most of it.

Wow this is pretty funny and surprisingly, kinda sexy too! Good job, I guess if I had to complain it would be that it kinda got complicated at the end with all the authors and cameos!

you iz goods authors. thisizgreatesst stroy eva ritten! Congratewlasion.

LOL.

" “Sally I didn’t know you were pregnant seeing as that’s the only way women produces milk” " 

That was great. It seems that you have the same "weird" sense of humor that I have. I also wrote a spoof-kinda shrunken male story. Although very different approach then you and I don't know if I pulled it off since some people don't get it.

"for the sake of the plot I temporarily lose my ability to think rationally"

This made me laugh for about a minute.

Something similar bothers me that you didn't convey... or maybe also share my opinion on but couldn't get into this plot.

I see many stories where the reaction of the female toward the shrunken man progresses the same. They are very realistic... your average woman, warm, kind and caring... a normal human being. When first presented with a tiny man, it just takes about 10 seconds for her to drop 40 IQ points and turn into sadistic bitches driven only by animalistic urges. 

At least turn them into sadistic tormenters over a gradual process... similar to those RP-ing experiments where normal people must simulate prisoners and prison guards. (If you know what I mean by this, certain sociology experiments... even a great german movie about it "Das Experiment".)

Also... the amount of fluid a vagina can create sometimes baffles me (in certain stories). Why would women even wear textile panties if this were true? 

I also strongly agree on the foot issues. Now, I don't judge people who have a foot fetish. I'm sure I have fetishes that are deemed weird. (I am not disgusted by feet howerer, just not turned on by them either.) But that foot play is only great for the shrunken man who is into that. No issue with that point of view. But from the giantess' perspective, highly unrealistic. The majority of people are very ticklish on their feet, and could stand anything touching it, especially small lifeforms. They would giggle and by involuntary reaction violently shake the foot and crushing the shrunken person. Unless you happen to find that rare person who is not ticklish there.

Wow, I didn't see a lenghty comment like this coming myself. :)

Although I must say, I want to be respectful to anyone on this site, no matter what they write. And I don't come across that many stories with an unimaginative plot. (Maybe I am lucky... also I don't click anything that contains the tag "feet". LOL :D Unless it's written by UHF.)

I figure some people are not here to write great plot-driven stories, which is okay (they probably realise that themselves). I view it as vocalizing their own fantasies, mostly for their own benefit. As an outlet. 

I must admit... you have a bit of a mean streak in your parody. But I see what you were trying to achieve and you did it brilliantly and in an original way.

Would read again... and appearantly I will... ;) (Did you get that?)

“Sally I didn’t know you were pregnant seeing as that’s the only way women produces milk” That's...Not entirely true, actually. Being on the pill can make you...Dribble.

Author's Response:

I supose that the correct phrase would be "... thats the only women naturally produce milk"

You also forgot "Sally was dressed very revealingly, because that's hot, and all teenage girls like to do that and she managed to get into school dressed like that because it's not like high schools have dress codes or anything like that."

Author's Response:

Damn another missed opportunity!

Yes! You overplayed your hand just a little bit in the second half -- but you definitely made me laugh. I've been thinking about writing out a mock-scenario like this for some time. 


"So we were sitting in class and it was the last class of the day, because it absolutely has to be the last class otherwise I’d have to explain how she covered up my disappearance and that would make my brain hurt.

'OMG Brian I, like totally have a crush on you, please come to my house.' She said to me as the final students left the class.

...For the sake of the plot I temporarily lose my ability to think rationally and agree to go to her house despite knowing nothing about her or her family."

[Just reposting this review under the proper chapter heading.]