[Report This]Date: July 19 2013 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 9
The way that you've kept this so realistic, and 'modern-girl' giantess,- discovers tiny little man, and his overwhelmed perspective as she casually, and effortlessly, captures his puny exsistance and thrusts him unwillingly into her feminine world.......is litterally spellbinding!
This is class 'A' Excellent GTS fantasy! I LOVE IT!
Author's Response:
That makes me so happy Cat! I'm just finding out now how hard it is to keep momentum going the further you get into one of these stories, so I'm pumped that you're still enjoying it. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: July 17 2013 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 9
I did enjoy it. So, rest easy...and post the next engrossing chapter whenever. :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks Cary, especially for your patience!
[Report This]Date: June 29 2013 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 8
This story is actually pretty good. And Parker has quite the decision to make.
Right now, I would want to stick with Ava, but there's no guarantee that she will remain sweet and calm.
Running is a gamble as well. Where will he go, can he even get out of the house, and then what? And how pissed will Ava be if he can't get someplace safe before she finds him again.
Since the Amazon is now connected to someone connected to Ava, staying with her might bring him closer to a solution. However, Ava has shown no interest in Parker's story than what she made up herself. I don't know if he would make it past his friend Victoria in his tale before Ava accuses him of being a cheater with a secret girlfriend.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review sketch! I agree, there's definitely a lot of different things that should factor into this decision.
[Report This]Date: June 29 2013 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
Are some rewards truly worth the risk?
With Ava; maybe so.
Author's Response:
I've been asking myself the same questions, Cary...
[Report This]Date: June 28 2013 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wow what an amazing chapter. I love this story. Can't wait to see what happens next.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks aaron, I can't wait to put it out!
[Report This]Date: June 22 2013 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 7
A classically twisted plot. Bravo!
Author's Response:
Thanks Cary!
[Report This]Date: June 22 2013 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 7
Hope to see more. Great story.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks aaron, glad that you're still enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: June 17 2013 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 6
This looks promising, somehow I'm feeling much more individuality with the characters in this story than in most. Well done, looking forward to seeing this continued
Author's Response:
Thank you Soniti! I'm glad that you like the characters; I feel as if the story is lost when the reader doesn't care about the characters in it.
[Report This]Date: June 16 2013 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 6
That was a fantastic chapter. And I'm looking forward to what happens next.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks for the support Aaron!
[Report This]Date: June 16 2013 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
Artistically written. Vivid description's, that had me cheering for tiny-sized Parker to make his way over to this unaware giantess! I love this chapter. Just making it out of that boot, and into that gigantic purse was so frickin awesome!
Oh, I really liked the : Nervously shaking, Parker held his breath as two brobdingnagian fingers took an item next to him captive...
Amazing stuff dude! If you keep this up, your going into my favorite Author list!
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks Cat! That would be an honor. I'll definitely keep chugging along; this giantess-writing is even more fun than I thought it would be :)
[Report This]Date: June 16 2013 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 6
Good luck, Parker! Something tells me you are going to need it.
Author's Response:
Ohhh yeah, he most definitely will Cary. Thanks again for your awesome feedback!
[Report This]Date: June 14 2013 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Tunes, this is a fantastic debut. You're clearly a talented writer, one who has a knack for characters. Parker, Patricia, Victoria, and even the nameless goddess all seem to be quite fleshed out, and I look forward to seeing how they interact in the future. Also, I especially liked the drug/hallucination tack you took with the shrinking. I thought it was very well done, and definitely a unique take on the ubiquitous (at least on this site) shrinking scene.
By that same token, though, I'm just a touch disappointed that the drug/hallucination tack didn't continue to feature heavily in your story. I half-expected Parker to wake up the next morning at his full height and for him to think the whole thing had been a trip, and that later on he would encounter the drug again, and that's when we'd see more shrinking. Don't get me wrong, I'm still very excited to see where you take the story; I guess I was just hoping for you to continue the unique start you had going, as opposed to having him continue his adventure simply and inexplicably shrunk. Put another way, I saw a lot of the magic realism theme in the shrinking scene, and I guess I was hoping for that to continue, especially since it's so rare in this genre.
Ultimately, it's still a great story that I'll keep coming back to. Think of the above paragraph as a musing more than anything. Anyway, thanks for the awesome read, and I hope you'll continue!
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks so much Casanova. That really makes me feel great, and I'm glad that you've enjoyed the story. I was especially worried about character development; it's good to know that I'm at least decently executing it. As for the shrinking means, it makes me even happier that you noticed that and thought it was sweet because I really wanted to branch out from your average shrinking process. Admittedly, I recently hit a writer's block and your comment really has me thinking...That's all I'm going to say ;). Please feel free to continue giving feedback because it helps so much. I appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: June 11 2013 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 5
Somebody's gonna steal him from there; I just know it! On the other hand, at least the "big smelly room" wasn't what I initially thought it was. ;-)
Author's Response:
Hah! I didn't even realize that it could have easily been something else until I looked over it. Good call.
[Report This]Date: June 09 2013 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
P.S.---looks like the "fatal error" has been corrected.
[Report This]Date: June 09 2013 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
So, Big Mamazon isn't going to keep him for herself, huh? I wonder who will become aware of him, first, then: Victoria or Patricia?
Author's Response:
Yeah, it finally started working for me today. Concerning who will become aware of him first, I might have a curveball ready on that one.
[Report This]Date: June 07 2013 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
A telepathic size-exchanger? Intriguing!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm definitely trying to layer the process of the shrinking itself and leave the technicality of it to the reader him/herself. So, it could be pharmaseutical, telepathic, combination, etc. Also, I was reading some stuff about the new Superman movie and I think it was Zack Snyder who was explaining how he wanted to portray the act of flying to be a difficult, intense experience. As you'll see in the next chapter, it definitely inspired me in writing the shrinking process. Thanks for the reviews to you, Cary, and everyone else. I LOVE hearing feedback and I appreciate it, it makes me think that others are as wrapped up in Parker's misadventures as I am :)
[Report This]Date: June 06 2013 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Take-a-lil'-trip,...take-a-lil'-trip,...Take a lit-tle Trip, wit-Me-eee!
Whiskey, and (Amazon) women, don't mix, Parker. Man, is he gonna have one hell of a hang-over!
Author's Response:
Indeed they don't!
[Report This]Date: June 05 2013 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'll bet he meets the bus-riding Amazon at this party. Although, we both know only the relatively prompt posting of chapter 3 will prove whether or not I'm right. ;-)
Author's Response: it'll most definitely be a night to remember for Parker ;)
[Report This]Date: June 05 2013 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story. I love the pace as well as the realism that this story possesses. Hope to see more. Also the feet where beautifully written.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback! Realism/relatability are both my more primary goals for this story.
[Report This]Date: June 04 2013 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start so far. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Sorry I'm just getting back to you now, but thank you! Hope you're still enjoying the story.