Date: March 17 2018 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
the story could have been a good one but for me there was to much shrinking and it stopped just started unless your goin to write more,it's nothing like the way its discrided
[Report This]Date: May 03 2016 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 4
Your story si awesome! I really you will finish it. I like the way Jake's mother dominate him and the fact she is excited to the idea to end his Life. I hope she will do it without any regrets
Date: March 01 2015 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 4
wow we need more of this XD
when the next part?
Date: January 29 2015 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
his mother
[Report This]Date: December 10 2014 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 4
Just found this story it's a shame it hassnt been up dated I'm a while it's a really good read :) specially where it left off would be good to see what happens to him. I really hope you continue this
Date: December 15 2013 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hoping you continue, this is really good so far.
[Report This]Date: September 04 2013 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really liking this so far!
[Report This]Date: August 04 2013 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story I love it please please continue it it would be so cool to see where she will take this. I love it
[Report This]Date: June 23 2013 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 4
This story is an absolute gem, so glad I've found. You apply a bit of everything which is nice. Eagerly anticipating more. One thing to add perhaps could be the comparison of their size difference? Other than that spot on.
[Report This]Date: June 22 2013 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 4
I hope she eats him. A cruel ending would be amazing
[Report This]Date: June 05 2013 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 3
So good! Please keep up the great work!
[Report This]Date: June 04 2013 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
Now wasn't this better? A bit of remorse plus consent and they already seem more like people with feelings rather than just porn-stars.
And the porn part is not bad - so keep it coming :>
Just two suggestions though (yes, never satisfied) - she shouldn't be able to "scoop him up" in both her hands if he is half inch tall and the "blowjob" wouldn't work either - not to mention that he will definitely need to work more on his own now :>
Date: June 04 2013 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story. I'm a huge fan of incest gts and your stuff is always great. I especially love this one for not only introducing a sexy, mischievous mom giantess but have the son be at least partially willing. Seeing a tiny son torn between his growing lust for his giantess mom, knowing that its wrong in many different ways while both scared and aroused, is so fascinating to read and makes for one Hell of a story. I’d love to see a conflict between both the mom and son over both of them being controlled by their desires. Amy will come to enjoy the power more and more, fighting to differentiate Jake from being her son and her sex toy. While Jake will be unsure what he wants, will he sacrifice his freedom and life to wallow in the pleasure he feels serving his mom? I don’t know if you’ll go in that direction, but that’s just what I’d enjoy seeing.
If someone feels that you’re not being believable with your characters or criticizes you for writing about incest, then they aren’t the audience for your stories and they should just not read your story. I always hate reading reviews where someone says something isn’t there thing and they need to change to better fit what they like. There are people that like what you write just the way it is and you should do what you enjoy best. Just carry on and keep up the fantastic work.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I plan on it, and who knows where my characters may go? Not me really, haven't thought that far ahead you see, but I'll keep your ideas in mind
-Jake
[Report This]Date: June 02 2013 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 2
What I don't like about incest is that motherly feelings don't work this way. A real mother wouldn't have tested the formula on her son and even if did, she would have dedicated all her efforts to fix him - and definitely not play with her son.. especially sexually.
Now, I don't care about Your deviations, but it simply unreliable - and if You wanted casual careless fun, then why not make her shrink some lab assistant? Plenty of choices there - and surely she would play with him and so on.
I also don't like the contrast of their behaviours in the two chapters. While one can barely understand Jake's switch from scared to unwilling - but I personally believe it would take hours or even days to get accustomed to such situation for a person that never was into such fetishes (and I understand he wasn't?) - but the Amy's turn from motherly love to forceful shrinking... I think it would be much better if You gave Jask some room for decision or at least explained her emotions transition some more.
I could find it believable that she would like to have some playtime once discovering the antidote - and he can always shrink back later. It would also convince Jake that he doesn't have to worry that much.
But I'm not trying to tell You how to write your story, just.. please don't make the characters so ridiculously shallow and unreliable like so many other stories (both Your and other authors).
I can see some potential here (that's why 4), it would be a pity if they turned to be mere puppets hanging off a deus ex machina driven plot.
[Report This]Date: June 01 2013 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic. Love it so far!
[Report This]Date: June 01 2013 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story I'm interested to see where it's headed. I loved the fact that she at first didn't realize that she had her feet propped up by her son. Then when she realized it she enjoyed it, and that was beautifully written. Can't wait to see what happens next.
aaron
[Report This]Date: May 31 2013 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story so far. I wonder how far she will go. Can't wait for the next chapter.