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Reviewer: Mr E Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29 2013 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 2

Short, but a good read. It seemed like it happened all too fast. iI it was spaced a little more and the word count was increased I would have gave it at least a 9 out of 10

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2013 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

I wonder if Jackson will think of this as a dream come true or if he will regret it. Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I will end the story in the second one as it is my first trial..hope you will like it..

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 31 2013 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

A great Start



Author's Response:

Thanks..you all are my inspiration....:)

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