Reviewer: kilaa0007 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2014 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

please i am in love with this story dont let it die :'( 

cant wait for him to get closer to her :D

Reviewer: Bor1 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12 2013 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

I' m so incredibly happy you decided to continue the history! Their first conversation was AMAZING. I think I could get to like their personalities, and the dialogue timing was perfect. Not even a bit fake or rushed! ...but damn if that wasn't a cliffhanger you left there. ...and hanging I'll be. Can't wait for the next chapter!

*one site I really like is "The Minimizer's shrinking fiction". It' s about the only place you can get some M/f stuff.

Author's Response:

Thanks! Sorry it took so long I couldn't deicide how their first conversation should go and had to step away from it for a while lol. I will try to get the next chapter up soon. I'll definitely check out that site, thank you!

Reviewer: Bor1 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

ok. Totally loved it. I mean REALLY. I'm normally more of a hardcore violence kind of girl but your story was so well written that i can't help but check EVERY day for an update. AMAZING. Please, please, please, pretty pretty PLEASE don't stop NOW. At least post their first dialogue. Also, the site really needs more M/f stuff, especially the good kind. I would love to talk to you - don't know many girls into micro/macro stuff.

Author's Response:

Oh Holy Jesus I’m so ridiculously happy somebody likes this story. I was waiting to see if anyone liked it before putting too much effort into it... but I have quite a bit of the next chapter written so I will add on next time I have a chance! I agree, I always have a really hard time finding new M/f stories, that’s half the reason I posted this one in the first place. Please feel free to contact me I’d know many girls into this either.