Reviews For Another universe
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Reviewer: sithlordnergal Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2013 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hmm, not bad. :3 I would like to see where this story leads to, so I hope you continue it.

Reviewer: unknown1 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24 2013 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like this one better than the other "Another Universe"



Author's Response:

Really sorry about adding two.  I tried up loading it but the page didn't load so i decided to do it later and made two by accident.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very, very nice introduction! Sweet and to the point, I love that; it gives plenty of background and detail about the world and also has some crush action, all within a couple of short paragraphs! Way to draw people into this story quickly, kudos to you buddy!

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