Reviews For Foiled!
Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2009 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Date: October 26 2009 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
this is my fantasy. wow thanks. cant believe i just found this masterpiece!! love the fact that there is mary-jane in this as well!! please keep going....
aaron
Reviewer: lucidiasat Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2009 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
Date: September 14 2009 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story is amazing, please continue........please
Reviewer: kpat Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2009 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Date: June 02 2009 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is one of my favourite stories, I can't believe it only got 3 comments 3 years ago. I remember when it was new, it's a shame its unfinished...
Reviewer: Vord Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2006 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: October 06 2006 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
I give this story, 9 out of 10 applauses. Good job and keep it up.
Reviewer: Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 06 2006 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
Date: October 06 2006 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
Good story so far. It would be great to be entrapped in a woman's shoe (or other places) as long as one did not get hurt. :) I am looking forward to future chapters.
Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2006 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Date: October 06 2006 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
really good start so far, i like where you are talking this. you even managed to give the characters some definition in a small amount of space.
Good Job.