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Reviewer: Halothecool Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2021 7:22 AM Title: Worst experience

Hmmm took a different turn that i thought it would but still alright 


Can't wait for maybe some butt action 

Reviewer: mad dog Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28 2018 10:49 PM Title: Worst experience

this story would have been good it started off good then stops' not a nuff to give a judgment 

Reviewer: Slacker28 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 12 2016 8:33 PM Title: Prologue

Just found this story, are you going to make more chapters?

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2015 1:34 AM Title: Worst experience

Nice story so far. I'm a little confused about Alison. She has crazy mood swings. From crazy to not. I'm wondering what's the real reason. That's hidden somewhere.

But anyways good story.

Reviewer: WinLik3aBosS Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2014 4:47 PM Title: Prologue

Hey! This story is awsome! I would like if she continues to be gentle, as that is my preferance, but of course, this is your story so you will do as you will :). I would just like to know if you will be updating any time soon? Because to me all my favorite stories on here never update!!! Lol, sorry if im raging, but anyway, please tell when you'll be updating again!



Author's Response:

I really appreciate the feedback! This comment is a huge motivation for me to continue writing chapters for this story. I hope that you still enjoy reading it.

Haha thanks for raging! 

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2013 11:34 PM Title: Hierarchy

Hopefully you still have plans for this

Reviewer: redman007 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2013 6:07 PM Title: Prologue

This story is brilliant, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2013 11:54 PM Title: Hierarchy

Great chapter!  Looking forward to the next one.  I always like stories where the shrinkee tries to put up a fight instead of giving in right away.  Even though, they really dont have a choice.   

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2013 9:22 PM Title: Hierarchy

I hope he resists. This is my type of story. This one is very exciting. Cannot wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2013 7:56 PM Title: Prologue

OH man, this girls got some issues, and shes even willing to shrink her parents if need be...Great story, Its starting to get a little more interesting!

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2013 12:53 AM Title: One sided fun

Hope you didnt forget!  Please continue.



Author's Response: I have not, thank you for the concern. My personal life has been very busy but there is now a new chapter uploaded.

Reviewer: parkeryellowstone Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 20 2013 12:01 AM Title: One sided fun

This is a pretty good story. My perrsoal tastes are to have to victim awake as they shrink so they can feel their clothes fall from their body and see everything grow around them.  Still you've got a great story going here.  If you asked me I''d  like to see his sister shrink someone else, maybe a girl so she can have double fun lol

Keep writing I hope you do well

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2013 2:14 PM Title: Prologue

Its getting awesome, keep it up, I feel great things coming from this story in the future!

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2013 5:54 AM Title: One sided fun

I love the new addition. The only complaint is that I wish he resisted more.

Reviewer: unknown1 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2013 3:18 AM Title: One sided fun

last chapter doesn't load



Author's Response: I have it written, but I'm having problems adding it into the website, sorry.

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2013 11:58 AM Title: Ally's birthday wish

I'm enjoying this!  Please continue!

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2013 2:50 AM Title: Ally's birthday wish

I hope it was intentional. I hope you make the brother unwilling in this story. Great new addition though.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2013 2:04 AM Title: Prologue

YES, yes.

Reviewer: Hansuke Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2013 12:13 AM Title: Prologue

Great story!  I hope it isn't a slow shrink.  Those stories suck. :P

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2013 11:23 PM Title: Prologue

Great start!  Would have liked to have seen the sister be a little older but aside from that, I'm looking forward to reading whats gonna happen next. 

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