Date: May 24 2013 12:26 PM Title: Introductions
As to Dan's situation? I think now that he _knows_ the rules, he'll notice them a lot more quickly than half the giantesses. Before the orientation; he would doubtlessly have thought it standard behavior.
[Report This]Date: May 24 2013 12:22 PM Title: Introductions
"So, now what?"
Now, we impatiently wait for chapter three (duh!).
;-)
Date: May 24 2013 11:44 AM Title: The fun begins
this school sounds fun! will their be feet?
Author's Response:
Sorry man. I don't have an attraction to feet, therefore I would be unable to write interactions that would please people, for I do not know what those are like. There are a lot of brilliant authors on this site who have a lot of feet stories, such as UHF, so i recommend that if you want feet, read their stories.
Date: May 24 2013 2:16 AM Title: The fun begins
You mention people turning to homosexuality, so that would mean that there's been a HIV epidemic. You'd think people would know of the dangers. It was still a nice chapter though and I think I will add this story to y favourites.
Also here:
to excited to find the words to respond.
You mean: too excited
Author's Response: When sexual interactions are no longer available with the other gender, I don't believe people would be focused on the "dangers" of them turning to homosexuality. Plus, if they use protection they could easily avoid HIV.
Date: May 23 2013 11:41 PM Title: First Day Stress
on @ least 5 occasions, including the pointed out 1, rules #2&3 were broken. wow
Author's Response: Would you notice that if you were in Dans situation?
[Report This]Date: May 23 2013 9:25 PM Title: First Day Stress
You have done a great introduction to characters, both tiny boys and normal sized girls, as well as their interactions with each other. I can't wait for the next chapter to come and see what interesting characters that you have in mind, keep up the good work!!
Date: May 23 2013 2:06 AM Title: Introductions
It was an alright chapter although the descripion of Dan's room was rather lacking. I am liking the story but there needs to be more "meat on the bones" as they say.
[Report This]Date: May 19 2013 12:12 PM Title: Orientation
I wonder how many girls are going to break Rule 2, and sucessfully prevent the enactment of Rule 3?
Date: May 19 2013 6:30 AM Title: Orientation
The pace of the story is good. Usually people rush into things.
Here:
He didn't need to be so shy,
You have a comma instead of a .
And where it says:
Dans thoughts
You mean:
Dan's thoughts
Because they're his.
[Report This]Date: May 18 2013 9:33 PM Title: First Day Stress
I like the premise of the story so far, just add some more spacing inbetween the paragraphs of the second chapter, I understand you wrote it from your Iphone so it may have been a little harder to tell.
Date: May 18 2013 3:11 PM Title: Orientation
Love it! You're truly building your own world! Can't wait to see more!
Date: May 18 2013 2:13 AM Title: First Day Stress
So far so good, i'll be looking forward to new chapters.
[Report This]Date: May 17 2013 10:20 PM Title: Orientation
Alright, I'm digging this so far.
Given that you've made exposition seem interesting and compelling, I'd say this deserves 8 stars!
Author's Response: Thank you man. It's great to hear that!
[Report This]Date: May 17 2013 2:56 PM Title: First Day Stress
Awesome story man! Keep it up. I've actually wrote a few stories basd on a similar concept to the one you have here, so if you need any ideas, feel free to check them out... Also agree with the others on how there should better than one guy, as it would be a little more interesting and open up more possibilities . Maybe if you wanted, you could have the one guy start off on their own, and add other guys later?
Author's Response: That's exactly what I was planning. Dan is part of the testing period, but if things go well with him I will add more characters. Also, the next chapter could help solve that.
Date: May 17 2013 2:16 PM Title: First Day Stress
I think you've got a really good concept and am looking to see where you go with this. I think it would have made much more sense to have more than just one guy attend the all girl school in a world where all the men have shrunken, but I understand wanting to personalize it with one character. Still, you could have had the other male characters just be in the background, like getting mentioned by other girls, or your main character watching in horror as he hides and sees another male student getting dropped into the back of her panties while no one else is around, but still have the story completely from his perspective. Plus, it would be harder for the teachers to keep track of several tiny male students as opposed to just one. I know shrinking is unrealistic, but you set it up in a very realistic way, but if they wanted to test out how the girl-boy interactions would be in a school with the male gender's new size, they would at least have a handful of guys (literally) do it.
Still looking forward to what comes next though!
[Report This]Date: May 17 2013 10:44 AM Title: First Day Stress
Well, judging from the litany of content descriptors, I'd guess that his roommates will run the usual emotional gamut for giantesses. Domineering, as a rule; gentle and caring, as an exception.
Date: May 17 2013 3:09 AM Title: First Day Stress
There could have been a bit more detail, as it was short, but it's a decent introduction nonetheless.