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Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2015 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 35

Your muse is in overdrive. Good thing CPS inc. has an escape tunnel. 

I think I spot a typo. I think you meant to say Grew  and not Crew in that Japanese women line. 



Author's Response: Good catch, thanks! Consider it corrected.

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2015 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 34

Quick. Call GP.



Author's Response: Either that, or a British dentist. Oh, wait! That's a contradiction in terms. ;-)

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2015 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 33

If I made a pun about this chapter, I'd just be trying to get JEEP laughs.



Author's Response: What can I say? I like vintage automobiles. I'll never be able to afford one! But, I like them, nonetheless.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2015 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 34

I see your muse is active. Wonder if there a way to get that armor-plated tapeworm out of a human without killing the human. 

Keep this story comming.



Author's Response: I'll do my best.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2015 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 33

Glad to see this story contiuned. As for his shocked reaction to the tale. It is  a hard story to believe.

Wonder what's going to happen next?



Author's Response: Wait and see, young Padawan. Wait and see! ;-)

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2015 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 32

Beware the trap:

The dreaded Ka-zap.



Author's Response: As puns go? That wasn't "bat." ;-)

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2015 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 32

And the plot twists contiune. Looks like the FBI agents lost the battle of FBI agents vs majorttes.

Wonder what going to happen next?

 

PS glad to see your muse is active, 

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 31

Oh Man, that could be a nice little 'set-up' for a great story!  ...Towering Russian Models casually lounging around in a Bahamian hotel,.. while at the sametime, using that store house full of *(SOL 62)* solution, to eventually,.. and very 'haphazardly', shrink everyone inside the entire country!  ;`)

... was it '007',  "The Man with the Golden Gun', or Vincent Price in 'The Bikini Machine' ?  This kinda brought those images, to my mind....I don't know why, though,... there's alot of the early eighties that I don't remeber? Ha!

 

 

 



Author's Response: You're partly right. If I were capable of doing IOTBTFOS as a fan-film, for Youtube, it would combine footage from ...BIKINI MACHINE, MARS ATTACKS, MARS NEEDS WOMEN, VILLAGE OF THE GIANTS, and THE MAJORETTES. In order to justify the crazy-sounding title! However, if you truly do wish to check out the alluded to story, it's filed-- for everyone's convenience--under "M.A.C.H.O. Tales."

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 31

Glad to see this story updated so quickly. Your muse is working while mine can't decide what to write. 

Anyway I look forward to the next installment.

 



Author's Response: Thanks. :-)

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2015 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 30

It's been so long since I've seen this story that I have forgotten the plot.

(kidding)

But seriously it has been a long time. Hope the wait for the next installment isn't months.



Author's Response: Even my Muses need to recharge their cosmic batteries, dude. ;-)

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11 2014 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 29

Glad to see your muse is working. (Unlike mine, but never mind that)

Looks like we have a team of good guys. But can they stop the aliens?

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2014 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 28

What's the matter, guys? One too many cultural references?

Well, too dang bad. ;-)

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08 2014 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 27

While not suprised to see shrinking in this installment. Things did not go as I expected. 

Wonder what's going to happen next. 



Author's Response: The plot will pretty much thicken.

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2014 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 26

Will the actress get her career back? It should be EZ



Author's Response: GOOD ONE! :-D

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2014 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 26

Glad to see this contiuned. I say that's a Ford Econoliner of trouble. 



Author's Response: A van-tastic amount of it. ;-)

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 24

I see you decided to contiune this story. Like the bit with the flying saucer and shrinking the ninja so they could get away.

 



Author's Response: Thank you! :-) Next chapter will be up, ASAP.

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2014 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 23

Let's just say the continuation of this story instead is one of life's little ironies



Author's Response: If I can, I'll do a major rewrite of the latter. Leaving the Greco-Roman motif in more capable hands.

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2014 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 22

I suppose I should refrain from making an aw-aw-aw-aw-awful pun about Tarzana.



Author's Response: Actually, it's quite appropriate. "Tarzan" author Edgar Rice Burroughs was the founding father of that town!

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2014 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 22

Two chapters in one day. You have been busy. 



Author's Response: Yeah. So much so, I even initially misspelled "physics!" I hate when that happens.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2014 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 21

I'm a little confused. Is he dreaming the encounter with the hive mind? Or did he make to the ground already. 



Author's Response: You were right the first time. :-)

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