Date: May 06 2015 4:30 PM Title: Ethan
A fucking classic!
Author's Response:
Thank you. It's greatly appreciated
[Report This]Date: February 06 2014 3:22 AM Title: Ethan
Really like your story, but I kinda want Lori in control in the end... Just personal preferences mind you.
Date: July 16 2013 1:59 PM Title: Ethan
Nice job on upping the stakes and keeping the story interesting! I'll be waiting on th edge of my seat for the next update!
[Report This]Date: June 30 2013 4:49 PM Title: Ethan
Day 7. No new chapters. I'm losing my mind. I don't what I'm going to do with myself until the next update. Just kidding haha really can't wait until the next update! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Well you know, I had to start the story off really strong to get the attention of those that would love it. Then, I allow for time to pass between chapters to let everyone that hasn't gotten to read it all to catch up, and to keep everyone else in suspense. Thanks for the compliment. I try to make it the kind of story I want to read
[Report This]Date: June 24 2013 9:54 PM Title: Ethan
Can't wait to see who won (other then the reader)
Author's Response:
Lol thanks. Read on and see. I have just put in the new chapter.
[Report This]Date: June 12 2013 5:57 AM Title: Ethan
YES, go Minne!!!
Author's Response:
Lol she is pretty awesome
[Report This]Date: June 10 2013 2:11 PM Title: Ethan
Great story, definitely one of the ones that I've been following lately. I loved the slow shrink aspect; you played that very well in my opinion.
Author's Response:
I appreciate that. Thanks for the comment and hope you continue to enjoy the story
Date: May 28 2013 11:27 PM Title: Ethan
Im actually missing Lori being a GTS, shes my favorite from the ones introduced thus far..
Author's Response:
Well don't worry. Lori will be again. I promise
Date: May 20 2013 9:51 PM Title: Ethan
Competely hooked! great story I love the way you develop your characters and the smooth flow of the story. keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment. Glad you are enjoying it. I just added a new chapter and will be adding more soon.
[Report This]Date: May 15 2013 9:36 AM Title: Ethan
The story is pretty good, I think you should not worry about publishing it daily , it would stop your motivation and inspiration , I hope to see more :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, I don't really worry about it, it's just that as I make the outline and get further ahead, I want to make sure I keep up the writing. It actually helps me to think of more stuff for future chapters. And truth be told, it's comments like yours that keep me motivated and inspired.
Thanks for reading
Date: May 11 2013 3:37 PM Title: Ethan
I love :3 Continue this story ! =D
Author's Response:
Thanks. And don't worry, this story has a long way to go
[Report This]Date: May 10 2013 9:26 AM Title: Ethan
Soo goood :3
Author's Response:
Glad you like it. I aim to please
[Report This]Date: May 08 2013 11:35 AM Title: Ethan
great stuff, can't wait to read more =)
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it. I am really having a fun time writing this story and seeing where it takes me. Hope you keep reading and that chapter 3 really gets your attention.
[Report This]Date: May 07 2013 6:07 PM Title: Ethan
Really good for a first start! The only complaint I have is the dialogue mixed with the descriptions but this has been voice before so whatever.
Anyway, the story itself is really good and I'm enjoying it. Ethan better hurry and make it up to Lori BEFORE he shrinks or he's screwed. When she's a goddess, There's no escape for him. By the by, will she be gentle or cruel? I can't tell fro. The direction this is going, but I would assume gentle. But after that rejection, the cruelty idea seeps into my brain...
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment. I understand the problem with the dialogue being mixed up with everything else and am currently trying to make sure my future chapters definitely have those two separate.
As for her being gentle or cruel, I think we will just have to wait and see. I can't give it away or it takes away...from the enjoyment of not knowing what will happen next. Hope chapter 3 takes you for a loop as I wanted to throw a kink into everyone's thought process of how this story might go. Nothing quite like a wild card
Date: May 06 2013 3:01 PM Title: Ethan
The story is off to an interesting start. With it being a shrink story though I'm worried that it'll mostly be about the guy being reduced to a helpless state rather then the woman being capable. It just isn't as enjoyable for me whenever a nasty fall down some steps, an encounter with a burgler or even an encounter with her father would strip the giantess of nearly all her supposed power.
From her response I'm guessing Lori has carried a flame for Ethan for a while. I wonder if her families wealth has influenced how people behave towards her and she's hoping for something less influenced by that in meeting with him again. I'm also wondering if Ethan was sort of given to Lori in hopes of keeping her out of trouble. Perhaps her father realized he can't really control her so it's best to give her something or in this case someone to keep her distracted.
LIke giving an over eager puppy a new chew toy to keep her away from your books and furniture.
Author's Response:
An interesting thought. But I actually want this story to start off in the way it doesn't interest you(Sorry). But as time goes on, Lori finds her inner Goddess and starts to take control of her own life. Very interesting opinion though. I greatly appreciate it and hope you will continue reading.