[Report This]Date: December 22 2013 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
You might have the most beautiful writing style on this website. I've only read the first paragraph and I love this story. Also, TinyDann sent me here.
[Report This]Date: December 22 2013 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is a fantastic story I only just got around to reading. The plot seems little short, but having a second story adresses that somewhat. The most impressive part is your descriptions, in particular with the lesser used senses like smell and taste. All and all, a very well crafted fantasy narrative.
[Report This]Date: December 16 2013 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 12
I missed this the first time around, and I am truly glad I caught it this time. A masterpiece.
Date: May 18 2013 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 12
Interesting ending. I wonder why the forest wanted Susanna to stay. Seems like it has some secret agenda of its own. I look forward to a sequel, as well as your other story. You're a very talented writer.
[Report This]Date: May 18 2013 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 12
Not a bad ending, in a MANOR of speaking.
[Report This]Date: May 17 2013 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 12
Great story. And I loved Indiana jones. Looking forward to that story.
aaron
[Report This]Date: May 16 2013 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 11
I'm glad he went with her.
[Report This]Date: May 16 2013 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter. I love Susanna's innocence as far as letting Vincent fully explore her body and his reciprocation of her wishes has made this story that much more lovable and even believable. Well done and I'm looking forward to what happens next.
aaron
Date: May 16 2013 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 10
Hmm, guess I was wrong with my faerie folk comment earlier. Interesting explanation for where Vincent comes from. Is the forest itself enchanted and/or sentient?
Nice job on the body exploration chapter. Wish it could have gone longer. Very interested to see where this goes and what potential sequels are in store.
Author's Response:
Is the forest enchanted? I just posted a new chapter that might shed some light on this...
Originally, the body exploration was a lot longer, but I found I was rehashing some of the same experiences Vincent had already (i.e. after Susanna fainted, while they were on the beach, etc.). Good stuff, but it was kind of redundant.
Date: May 15 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 10
Well if the story's ending, could she find the urge to eat him?
Author's Response:
Without giving too much away, I'm already outlining a sequel. Could such a situation still occur? We'll see... ;)
[Report This]Date: May 13 2013 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 9
So gripping it makes me wish this could really happen
[Report This]Date: May 13 2013 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
the depth of build-up and length of enjoyable descriptive detail of the mouth play is something I've never (or rarely) been able to come up with in any of my lengthy novels.
You are truly an awe inspiring writer on this forum.
[Report This]Date: May 13 2013 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
I really like the scenes where he reacts to her tummy.
[Report This]Date: May 13 2013 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 4
What a great place to save face.
[Report This]Date: May 13 2013 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
This is great, bringing to life the "Don't eat me" comic I read on giantessfan.com in a new way.
[Report This]Date: May 13 2013 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 9
This story is superb. I can't believe I waited this long to read it. Can't wait to see what happens next.
aaron
Date: May 08 2013 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 7
Good chapter. Very amusing travel scene. This did answer some questions about how Vincent's powers work but I hope we will learn more about just who/what he is.
That last line (and its set-up) cracked me up.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Don't worry, I've got a lot of the backstory planned out; I'm not making it up as I go along (for the most part). It's just a matter of revealing it within the structure of the narrative, which is difficult, since I'm really tempted to just give all the answers at once. But if there's something I learned from the TV show, "Lost," it's that sometimes the mystery and the discovery of answers is even better than the narrative itself. ;)
[Report This]Date: May 08 2013 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
I've been lurking this website for a couple of years now- probably half a decade. And I'd like you to know what a pleasure reading this story is. Your writing skills are amazing! Out of all the stories I have read- this might just be the best yet! Can't wait to read more! (:
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! Fellow lurkers unite!
Date: May 06 2013 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved the new chapter. The mouthplay scene was great. Susanna seems to have discovered her playful side. Why were her lips losing color though? Lipstick rubbing off?
Author's Response:
Good question. It was a meant as an indicator of oxygen deprivation: her lips going pallor. As she was merely holding her breath, I suppose it doesn't make perfect sense, other than that it might have it only seemed that way to Vincent as a result of his fears.
Glad you liked the chapter, it was fun to write. ;)
Date: May 02 2013 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 3
This is very well written. The descriptions are quite vivid and I love your explanation of hypnopompia. I'm a sucker for stories about the faerie folk so I think I will enjoy this. Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Pixis! I've been a long time lurking fan of your work. Perhaps you'll be able to see where your own stories have lent inspiration to mine...