Date: October 06 2016 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up
Wonderful story! Well written and I enjoy the approach of taking a simple transformation theme and turning into a great adventure. Would love to see an addition to this, but certainly appreciate the couple existing chapters!
[Report This]Date: April 01 2015 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great story line. Hands down my favorite of all time. Any plans to revisit and add to the story??
Author's Response:
Thank you again. When I'm less busy hopefully I can do a reboot or re-write. We shall see.
[Report This]Date: January 09 2015 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up
I really wish you would continue this story. It was aleays by far my favorite!!
Author's Response:
I was excited for this story at first as well. But lack of good response and diffuclty in writing it in a unquie stysle was very taxing. I actually have plans possibly in the future for a reboot or rewrite.
[Report This]Date: April 23 2013 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up
Did they even have panties 430 years ago?
Bloomers? Pantaloons?
Author's Response:
Considering the Witch Alice was thousands of years old, and panties were first crated by the ancient greece. http://beaverland.web.fc2.com/eroshist/panty_en.html The fact that she was not limited by humans current technolgy, as she had magic, imagining she had panties is not too far fetched a concept. But you are quite right, given the times, and the fact cotton wasn't around etc. But as Alice is yet again a Witch, it can still be plausible. Besides this is a work of fiction. Thanks for the reveiw!
By the way everyone, I really hate writing in old english, how long do you guys think it should take before Malcom becomes more fluent in the American language? Or should I slowly just allow him to start ussing contractions, etc?