[Report This]Date: April 15 2013 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 1: SPRING BREAK!!!
I don't think that you could actually over discribe.... unless, you start repeating yourself. Ha) I like this first chapter, it was easy to visualize the house and the stairway, ( I see that you also, like the name- 'Sarah', me too) The couple of errors, were a little confusing, but nothing really. I like that she's 6' tall, and the car that she drives, it says alot about her persona', (aside from being a cheerleader as well) she sounds like a great giantess!
Can't wait for next chapter, your doing a great job....
Author's Response: Stay patient little one
Date: April 15 2013 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 1: SPRING BREAK!!!
The description is fine. I liked it. The spacing between lines is an issue but your profile does state you like to write on your iPhone and that to me seems rather awkward so some errors are to be expected. It's good start I think, so don't worry yourself too much.
Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying tiny :)