Date: April 17 2013 10:29 PM Title: Caught
i think the littl gilr should have a big sister(teen(you know for the fetures)) and she fines them and also playes around with them sutch as using panting and modeling materials to tern them into doll cretures like alien mermaids and such. And then uses them as dildowes for hew girlfrend that sneeks in the middl of the night. and maby also for the feet stuff the big girls put on wedhe high heels boots or shoes anddo stff with that.
Date: April 17 2013 8:35 PM Title: Caught
I'm quite enjoying this. You have a nice sense of the teasing playful tone one ought to take with this particular subgenre. Even an act like hair getting forcibly colored with a marker has weight to it. Well done! I'll be checking back in at the next update.
Author's Response:
Thank you greatly. pretty much my first work so trying to formulate lots of ideas and write them well. I've read your stories at least 1oo times. They never get old and they seem so real and can easily be understood. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: April 17 2013 6:15 PM Title: Caught
Like where this is going! Hope the girls are played with, and humiliated! Will you be involving any feet/foot fetish aspects, i.e. the tiny girls dropped in Becky's dirty socks/sneakers, made to paint her toe nails etc? Would be cool if you did!
Author's Response:
Chapter 3 should be a little bit more destructive for the girls. Heavy playtime. Might include feet stuff, which some other viewers have expressed as well. Thank you for your input :)
Date: April 15 2013 10:43 AM Title: Caught
The story is alright so far, although I feel there could have been more of a premise to it Your story reminds of another story I read, about a dollhouse, which you can view here:
http://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=2761
Author's Response:
Yea its my first story so i'm kinda easing into it little by little. The second chapter should be much better though. The first was just to kind of start something. But thanks for your input and yes I've read that story before that you sent. I can kind of see the similarity.
Date: April 13 2013 10:33 AM Title: Caught
Hey, nice to see some fresh SW material for a change! (in general i mean, not just you :P )
Well paced, nicely worded and not too strict on the details. Looking forward to the updates :)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much :) if you have any suggestions of what you'd like to read or are interested in, always welcome input.
[Report This]Date: April 11 2013 5:27 PM Title: Caught
Great first chapter, wonder what kind of play she has in store.