[Report This]Date: November 19 2013 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 32
Uh-oh! I have a bad feeling that "graceful, feminine hand" belongs to Charis. If so, I think I know what she has in mind. And, if Gage tries to claim he has a headache, I don't think she'll accept that as an answer. :-(
[Report This]Date: November 12 2013 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 31
That might be why Gage is becoming so despondent. He's worried about his partner's increasingly sadistic streak (especially re: Alicia).
[Report This]Date: November 04 2013 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 30
"There (are) still many more fights to come, and I don't expect any of them to go this smoothly."
Methinks he doth "Gage" the situation, correctly.
Author's Response:
Our hero better "Charis" the time he has left! =D
[Report This]Date: October 23 2013 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 29
One word: excellent! :-D
[Report This]Date: October 14 2013 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 28
"Toe" shay!
;-D
[Five stars just for (initially) out-punning me.]
[Report This]Date: October 14 2013 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 28
So, in other words: Charis' games are still a-foot?
LOL!
Author's Response:
Toe-tally!
[Report This]Date: October 07 2013 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 27
I don't think this is quite the clemency TinyDann had in mind for Alicia. LOL!
Author's Response:
Alicia might have it rough, but I think at least a few of my readers would love to trade places with her.
[Report This]Date: September 30 2013 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 26
I take it a pre-fight fete' is definitely out-of-character for Mr. Vane. In any event, I hope it won't take the _full_ 26 weeks for ch. 27 to hit the "Most Recent" column.
That would be taking unfair advantage of our addiction to this story! ;-)
Author's Response:
Definitely gonna try my best not to lose this bet... look for another exciting episode of Perfect Dimension on Monday!
[Report This]Date: September 23 2013 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm very much enjoying this story.
You have a good imagination - describing the scenes very well.
It would be helpful, though, if you included a brief desciption with each chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, SafetyPin. I'll definitely start throwing up some chapter notes, and maybe I'll go back and add some to previous chapters later. If nothing else, I'll avoid being a hypocrite (I love chapter notes in other stories, but can't be bothered to put them in mine, apparently).
[Report This]Date: September 23 2013 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 25
Would that be tough-acting Tenaxis?
Ba-DUM-boom!
Seriously, though; I can't even hazard a _wild_ guess as to what you've got planned for the next brilliant chapter. So, I guess it's guaranteed that I'll be tuning in for it! :-)
Author's Response:
"Would that be tough-acting Tenaxis?"
This joke has so many levels of hilarity it's unreal.
[Report This]Date: September 17 2013 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 24
One word: WHOA!
Okay; so I actually have _more_ than one word in mind. To answer your earlier question? Long before DC Comics started having their every-ten-years-like-clockwork crises (which screwed up their continuity way worse than it ever allegedly was, pre-1985), the comic book Teen Titans were made up of Robin, Kid Flash, Speedy (Green Arrow's original sidekick; now known as Arsenal); Wonder Girl (WW's adopted younger sister); and Lilith. This mind-reading redhead initially had an origin as mysterious as Wolverine's used to be. But, she was eventually revealed to be the half-mortal daughter of Thia; wife of Helios the Solar Titan (as in, the Titans of Greco-Roman mythology). And, prior to the ill-advised, much unwanted, and completely needless CRISIS ON INFINITE EARTHS, she had gone with caveman-boyfriend Gnark to live on the Saturnian moon of Titan with her mother's people.
Author's Response:
Sounds like this Lilith chick is a total boss. And if her boyfriend is a caveman, I may have a shot with her. Surely I can out-seduce a guy named Gnark.
Date: September 11 2013 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice story, loving it so far.
Was actually going for the 14 years of age. What made you change that, if i you could be so kind enough to answer?
Author's Response:
Well, I had it there originally because I thought it would be a more compelling story. That being said, I don't think it's ever a good idea to have underage characters on a fetish website. I normally view this self-imposed rule as non-negotiable in the stories I write, but I somehow convinced myself to make an exception; anyway, I decided to change it back in keeping with that rule, and also thanks to some encouragement in the reviews.
Glad you like the story Cooper, more to come on Monday!
[Report This]Date: September 10 2013 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 23
Only chapter 24 will answer that question for you, Charis. ;-)
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks for all of the reviews Carycomic. I really appreciate the honest reactions you gave me for each chapter; the feedback is extremely valuable. Also, if I'm not mistaken, you must have read the entire story up to this point in one sitting. That may be the greatest compliment of all. I hope you enjoyed it. In response to some of your remarks:
"Lilith? As in, the mind-reading redhead from the Silver Age Teen Titans?" Not sure who that particular character is, to be honest. I just chose the name because it seemed like one that someone online would use; looking back, I maybe shouldn't have included it at all, since that character ended up being quite trivial to the overall story.
"A witch who's a Lionel Ritchie fan? She must be using a "Commodore" computer systerm (lol!)." Nice pick up! I just threw that in there as an Easter Egg; I'm glad somebody nabbed it.
"Huh? Didn't Charis and Gage get jailbroken, at the same time?" So yeah, only Gage got jailbroken in the beginning. Maybe I'll go back and re-word the beginning so that it's more obvious.
"What road is that? That he had secretly fallen in love with Charis before the "jailbreak?" But, that he's now developing equally strong feelings for Rima?" An interesting speculation... I'll leave you in suspense.
"Whoa! And, here, I thought he might've been in an accident similar to Rima's...only worse. Makes me now wonder if he was terminally ill!" Another interesting speculation... Let's just say that Gage's... situation... plays a huge role as the story progresses. If that sounds ominous... well then I'm doing my job.
"Only chapter 24 will answer that question for you, Charis. ;-)" Maybe not Chapter 24, but perhaps by Chapter 30 we'll have it all figured out.
Thanks again for all of your comments, Carycomic. I hope you'll stick around for the rest.
[Report This]Date: September 10 2013 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 22
Whoa! And, here, I thought he might've been in an accident similar to Rima's...only worse. Makes me now wonder if he was terminally ill!
[Report This]Date: September 10 2013 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 21
What road is that? That he had secretly fallen in love with Charis before the "jailbreak?" But, that he's now developing equally strong feelings for Rima?
[Report This]Date: September 10 2013 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 20
Huh? Didn't Charis and Gage get jailbroken, at the same time?
[Report This]Date: September 10 2013 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 19
Good interlude. :-)
[Report This]Date: September 10 2013 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 18
Now, THAT is what I call a classic plot-twist!
[Report This]Date: September 10 2013 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 16
Hopefully, the plan involves sitting on her wand and amplifying its usual output.
[Report This]Date: September 10 2013 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 13
Fit? Meet Shan.