Reviews For The New Big Sister
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Reviewer: Vexin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2016 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 6(Danny): Nightmares

Keep up the good work, hope to see more soon :D

Reviewer: dood07 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 07 2015 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 6(Danny): Nightmares

Yep, it really is a great story ! 

Sadly it seems it hasn't been updated for a long time, I'm afraid you maybe lost insterest ? So if you read this please continue what you've begun ! You've have a nice plot and interesting charachters, I wanna see what's going to happen when Danny finds out what Elena did in the past !! ..hopefully he won't be so mad, maybe a little afraid, but apparently we can't blame her from what you've written..

Reviewer: Moonpie Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10 2014 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 (Danny): Size Difference

Will you be continuing this? I really hope so

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2013 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 (Danny): Size Difference

 

hope for more soon

Reviewer: BamTheHam420 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08 2013 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1 (Danny): Size Difference

i have high expectations for this. super great so far! keep it up!!

 

Reviewer: randomwierdness Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08 2013 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 6(Danny): Nightmares

Nice plot twist

Reviewer: fukitol Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08 2013 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 1 (Danny): Size Difference

(not so) patiently awating more chapters. really liking the whole little brother/pet spin you got going on.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2013 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 (Danny): Size Difference

Danny's going to FREAK when he finds out about Elena's past. And I wouldn't be able to blame him one bit. This is a geat story so far Hero, its really shaping up to be one of the greats!

Reviewer: Ghost254 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2013 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 5 (Elena): His Birthday

Really nice story, not like al the other on this site, unique in it's own way. Can't wait to see how you take it further. Maybe a little voyeur, I don't know. I'm sure whatever you do will be good though. 

Reviewer: Heroics2 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2013 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 1 (Danny): Size Difference

Sorry about that, it is far from done. There is so much more to come for Elena and Danny. I'm finishing up ch.4 right now then on to ch.5. Hopefully ch.5 will be posted tonight so can work on ch.6

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2013 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 1 (Danny): Size Difference

Is this story done? It says done on the front page. I hope not cuz its awesome and Elena seems mad at Danny, I wanna see what happens!

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