[Report This]Date: September 24 2013 5:47 PM Title: Ch. 6 School Daze
Suggestions for future chapters? Well, as you might guess from many of my own stories, I'm partial to boys getting eaten (as in swallowed alive) by their lady teachers, and you seem to have a ready made character in Ms James.
[Report This]Date: September 22 2013 3:52 PM Title: Ch. 6 School Daze
And, here's where the Troublesome Twosome become a shrink-happy foursome.
[Report This]Date: September 22 2013 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 5
I read these first five chapters in one sitting, believe it or not. And, I have to say it; Sandy and Mimi are two of the scariest ditzy giantesses I've ever read about, here!
[Report This]Date: September 22 2013 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
"A little ditty
About Jack and Tiny Dan.
Two newly shrunken men,
Doin' the best they can."
[Report This]Date: September 22 2013 2:11 PM Title: Ch. 6 School Daze
Suggestion: take him home to mother - a widowed woman in need of a little sexual companionship. : )
Date: August 23 2013 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
The discriptions you give on how tiny and helpless the victims are is incredible! Great work! Wondering who else the girls will shrink, perhaps a mass shrinking like a vehicle with multiple people in it? And then they have to catch them?
Keep going!
Date: May 19 2013 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow. I didn't discovery your story until after I'd started to write mine, but as should be obvious to anyone I think your attention to detail is fantastic. Your descriptions are great, very realistic and creative. Please keep up this story as I literally can't wait to read what you write next.
[Report This]Date: May 19 2013 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
I agree with some of the reviewers here...When it comes to writting good smut most writters on this site cant even hold a candle to you!
Date: April 16 2013 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
I think once the girls ar finished and kill the guys somhow they shrink a girl (or girls) and do gust as horible things. maby they shrink a car of them and play with the car.
maby the next day they go buy som sexy clowth shoues and other stuf then do even more!
Date: April 11 2013 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
Honestiy,you are the best writer ever.Its bad that i have discoverrd ur stories to late.You write just......awesome.
My only suggestion is you keep using teenage giant girls.PLEASE try to use micro.
Trust me your details are just beyond awesome and u would be the best if u do that.
I hope you take my advice and keep doing micro/feet,pussy slave,these kind of stuff.
I will always support you! Gluck pro writer!
Author's Response:
Thanks 4 the support Lolwat111 !, I'll try an shrink 'em down a little more, just for you. I normally like to image them at around 6 inches tall, (my own preferance) but I wanted to try and do this story solely based on reviewers suggestions. So 'You' asked for it, and I'll make it happen. The micro-sized man is a little fragile, and can become, very easily 'Lost' by the giantess. A much different experance, then I'm used to writing, but I'll give it a shot....
Date: March 27 2013 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'd like to see a butt chapter, possibly with them working out with him trapped in one of their panties.
Author's Response:
Cool! I try and work that in. Thanks Luke!
Date: March 25 2013 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'd hate to sound like one of those people but I would enjoy some feet interaction
Also I find it curious that the age of the giantesses is only barely hinted at. Was this done on purpose because if so its a good writting strategy and congrads on using it properly.
Author's Response:
Yes, the 'age' is disreguarded, in this one. I plan on just making a quick 'Daydream-like' exsperiance. A hortatory work, meant to inspire , and honour the Hesperus.
[Report This]Date: March 24 2013 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Are they gonna have some fun and play with him?
Author's Response:
Fun for them I suppose? Maybe, what would be fun Pasret4, you tell me. I'm just hunting 4 some new P.O.V.'s
Maybe I'll use them, maybe not.....
[Report This]Date: March 24 2013 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm going with zbh, throw him in the 'ol sock!
Author's Response:
Aye, ye' 'oL soc-a-roonie, always a fragrant choice......
[Report This]Date: March 24 2013 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sit on him! Come on man, you know I love butt action ;) Smother scenarios are fun and several ways you can do it, sitting on him works obviously but also in her armpit or behind her knee or lowering a thigh down on top of him or have him on one of thier stomachs and then another one lowers a thigh on him. Lots of ways to smother him!
Author's Response:
Big-time Wrestling! Only he's double-teamed, and greatly outsized! These girls are going to be a bit 'Timid' at first though......
Date: March 24 2013 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Foot worship, maybe putting him in their shoes or socks and walking on him.
Author's Response:
Oh,yea that's automatic, anything else though,..like REAL mean, or just teasing?....
[Report This]Date: March 24 2013 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good start but no telling if this is gonna be gentle or not yet, so its kinda hard to suggest anything.
Author's Response:
Gentle, mean, sour, or sweet... It's up to you, just tell me what 'you' would like to happen to you/ (Uh,uum) Dan, I mean....Ha, )