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Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2013 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love the first chapter, I hope you decide to add another soon.

Reviewer: Cheezo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 16 2013 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great start! I look forward to more. My only criticism is the fact that the names Paula and Laura are too similar. I found myself getting lost several times when reading that chapter.

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