[Report This]Date: March 14 2013 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, so 'cruel', I just thought, (after, just reading the tale) that the toe's would be your method of tantilizing torture.....
Your recipe has several blends of ingredients, I see. The plastic box representing a crucible of sorts? What if there were a single surviver, among them, would he be set free, or instantly finished off, or held in contempt???
[Report This]Date: March 14 2013 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
My God, I'd hate to see what would happen to some dude that she was actually pissed-off, At! Damn, mean-ass girl, with a 'shrink-ray', what a way to go.....
My favorite part was, the: "Far above he could hear her girlish giggles, their lightheartedness juxtaposed against his inhuman treatment"
P.S. Have you ever burned the wings off of house-flies, and let then wonder around on your floor, while walking around barefoot and taunting them? Ha, ;`)
Author's Response:
I never have, but I do have a small plastic box I trap spiders in and let them run around 'til they starve to death. Takes a few weeks, most of which they spend shut away in my drawer forgotten about. Glad you liked the story though!