[Report This]Date: March 01 2013 11:08 PM Title: One Last Time
Good discriptions, and slow build-up to the realization.......
I don't know where your going with this, but I like it so far.....
Very passionate... keep going, it can only get better!
Author's Response:
Thank you for commenting I'm glad that my use of descriptive language was pleasing I can only hope that my sanity remains intact as writting this can sometimes become mentally straining
[Report This]Date: March 01 2013 11:07 PM Title: One Last Time
Da fukk? you cant end ch. like this unless u have another to immediately follow. Now im going to be checking every few hrs for more (like always lol) of this story.
What the heck is going on first his bully gave him a cryptic message, then his best friends some how shrink him, then his best friend is going to kill him for an unknown reason?
FUKKK!
no but seriously do continue soon this story already got my interest.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comment It's great to get so much support. Don't worry chapter 2 is soon to be uploaded because I started working on it as soon I uploaded this chapter. hopefully it will be as good as the first.
[Report This]Date: March 01 2013 10:30 PM Title: One Last Time
I don't know why, but this story struck me in the way very few ever have. You certainly have put a lot of passion into this.
Author's Response:
Thank you Dude I'm glad you liked it, and I am honored to have you as my first commenter ever. Its strange this story was actually inspired by a lucid dream I had a couple of nights ago and Angela was the girl in the dream and I was Josh I supose the reason its so passionate is because in a way this actually happened to me