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Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2013 11:01 PM Title: Her Rebuttal

Allan's in DEEP, real-deep!   Desiree could just 'Clinch',  and no more Allan!

Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 06 2013 10:14 PM Title: Allan's mistake

I want to find out...

This is suspenseful!



Author's Response:

Stay tuned...................

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 06 2013 10:21 AM Title: Allan's mistake

This is bound to be the shortest "unaware/crush" story in gts-history.

Author's Response:

Maybe ,maybe not

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2013 9:18 AM Title: Morning Honey

Great start. I love long detailed stories. And I really hope this is continued.

aaron

Author's Response:

Not exactly sure where im going to take this but hope its enjoyable.

Reviewer: Don Walt Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2013 8:31 PM Title: Morning Honey

I like where this is going and I would like to see more



Author's Response:

You ask and i'll deliver-like the milkman circa 1950

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2013 7:07 PM Title: Morning Honey

I like it.  I would like to see Allen put through his paces...

Maybe, a pajama party, or a sleep-over with the girls?  Would his girlfriend keep him a secret,  or show him to all her friends?   Your good at discribing the view from the tinies perspective, and I would like to see you do more of that...

   Keep Going!  



Author's Response:

Im not so certain if Desiree is going to be a cruel aware driver of his pain-train.You can rest assured that Allan will not enjoy his new life however.

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