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Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2013 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

LoveitLoveitLoveitLoveitLoveit!!!!!

Please, by all that is sacred, are you doing more stories like this?

Reviewer: Lexilove20 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2013 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2013 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ireally liked! Wish there would of been more to what happened to him really make him suffer or maybe permant toy.

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 10 2013 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like this theme. However, this particular story is too short for my tastes.

Even the contents are not original.

 

Reviewer: miniscule Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10 2013 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

First, the author gets points for his name alone. CoolioMcbunny is top moniker of the decade. Second, the story is interesting with a great plot. The grammar and sentence structure could be better, but it was still an excellent post.  Thank you Mr. McBunny.

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 10 2013 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

Short, sweet, to the point. I liked this story, and I've seen a lot like it. Just space out the sentences. Still good though.

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