Date: October 20 2013 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great Story :) later they make a party where they environment other girls to to and the dower or more or them are going around in gothic to drinkers to futurity dresses and clothes absolutely trampling the city. So why haven't you continue ed almost any of your story's?
[Report This]Date: June 16 2013 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
I think it'd be nice if we could introduce a male giant. Can't go wrong with stuffing tons of tinies into a big girls pussy and fucking the shit out of her.
[Report This]Date: February 07 2013 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
A Classic! I loved this when you first put it out way back in 2005. Great story. Glad to see it uploaded.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback. Its hard to think 2005 was 8 years. Man, where does the time go?
Date: February 07 2013 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Please choose to continue writing! I have read most of your stories posted on this site and I am a huge fan of your work, writing, perspectives, etc.!!!
I think you should continue with the way the plot is going, except there should be some factor of decay in the story. For example, the vortex constantly makes them larger so that they end up destroying the world. That way the story can actually come to an end, and the same writing can progress and continue to be enjoyed. More scenarios involving their sex life!
Also, I specifically love of your story, Field Trip to Hell. Hope one day you may decide to add a little to it! Hope you can find the interest/time to add on to some of you stories.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback! If I were to continue any of my old stories, Field Trip To Hell would be a very strong candidate for that because it seems to be very popular with a lot of people for some reason. Not entirely sure why... but for that same reason I'm a little afraid to continue it because I don't want to take it in a direction where people would no longer like it, so if I get around to continue it I need to figure out a way to do it that everyone would like... do you have any ideas?
[Report This]Date: February 06 2013 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Me likey!
Looking forward to future chapters.
[Report This]Date: February 06 2013 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, so many possabilitys! A vortex inside of the girls closet, Hmmmm, yeah, she could enter in the middle of the night, ( can't sleep?) find a little plaything, and just enjoy herself, then just dispose of him,..OR, even better, keep him, and use him for a lil' foot slave, or to just keep her company,....So, so, many possabilitys!
Great Story! I hope that you come up with another chapter, SOON!