Reviews For Jarret Johnson
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Reviewer: Giantess_Lover124 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2014 5:09 PM Title: Thursday, August 16, 2012, Day 2

Continue this incomplete story or do a sequel

Reviewer: The Toy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29 2013 1:23 PM Title: Thursday, August 16, 2012, Day 2

I am excited to continue reading this story and I anticipate the next chapter

-The Toy

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2013 9:19 PM Title: Thursday, August 16, 2012, Day 2

Love the story, hope it gets finished one day.

Reviewer: UserDoesNotExist Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2013 9:59 AM Title: Wednesday, September 19, 2012/ Wednesday, August 15, 2012, Day 35/Day 1

You gotta put some more into your descriptions, you never even established how Stacy looks.

When doing crush, you should describe texture, impulse, and emotions as often as possible. Take your time, don't rush situations. Give people their chance at dialogue, especially the giant in the situation.

Good start, though.

Reviewer: carpette12 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2013 12:04 PM Title: Wednesday, September 19, 2012/ Wednesday, August 15, 2012, Day 35/Day 1

amazing! Please continue, it's a very good start! :)

Reviewer: BigAl Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2013 7:07 AM Title: Thursday, August 16, 2012, Day 2

An interesting start, looking forward to watching the story develop!
I noticed you mention animal involvement in the first chapter. Please warn us before that so I can skip it please! Everything else is fine!

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2013 1:16 AM Title: Thursday, August 16, 2012, Day 2

Great new chapter, cannot wait to see who survives muwahahahah.

Reviewer: Lil Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2013 4:06 AM Title: Wednesday, September 19, 2012/ Wednesday, August 15, 2012, Day 35/Day 1

Good story :D Need to read the next ! D 

Reviewer: Gtsboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2013 9:06 PM Title: Wednesday, September 19, 2012/ Wednesday, August 15, 2012, Day 35/Day 1

Nice story, I like it so far! I was also wondering what your plans were with "Toy Boy 2".

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2013 8:41 PM Title: Wednesday, September 19, 2012/ Wednesday, August 15, 2012, Day 35/Day 1

Great first chapter, cannot wait to see what she does next.

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