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Reviewer: Agitated Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2016 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 9

Excellent. Please continue

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2016 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 9

Three years at least? Seriously, this is an __amazing__ story!!!

Reviewer: Antagoniser Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2013 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 9

PLEASE add more to this story, it's amazing :D

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 9

I found the text in italics confusing as I had to reread the first few setenaces until I understood because the first one is:

I must look ridiculous..

And it threw me because I was at first under the impression the story was written in first person. If you're going to write in the third person stick to that and try not to include thoughts unless they are in speech marks.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2013 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 9

Heh! That'd be a great name for a superhero show.

"Footboy! Nananananananananana! Footboy!"

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2013 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 8

Really liking this story even more now.

aaron

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2013 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 8

What a... Touching chapter. If this is Nicole now, how is she going to be when he's really small?



Author's Response:

Good question :)  Honestly I don't think I know yet.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2013 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 8

That was pretty good. I like your description. I got a real sense of intimacy from this chapter. I can see their relationship blossoming.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2013 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 8

A gentle giantess on a morning-after? That's a rarity. Nice to see it employed in this chapter. :-)

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2013 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 8

 

this story should update every hour. I cant get enough of it lol.

Good work so far on the story



Author's Response:

:) Well for what it's worth, hearing things like that does motivate me to update it more frequently - so thank you and more to come.. soonish

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16 2013 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 6

I'm sure Nicole is nice person but I am thinking Tyle does have second thoughts. And what will the people at work think if he's not there? Or his family? Nicole can't get away with what she is doing for too long, however much Tyle likes it.



Author's Response:

That's a very good point actually, I'm just not sure how much I really want to get into the "getting away with it" side of things.  If I can work something in without taking focus away from the rest of the story I will definitely try.  Thanks for your reviews and input.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16 2013 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 5

Wow, that was scary.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16 2013 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 3

That was interesting. I think Nicole is a very strange and mysterious character and I'm not sure if I will take a liking to her.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16 2013 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

A good start. I like the descriptive language you use.

Reviewer: littlegeek Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15 2013 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

I've been reading stories on this site for the better part of the last 5 years and never created an account. Your story has changed that. I had to tell you how well you've written it. The characters have actual depth and, while there is size play, it's secondary to the overall power dynamic. This is definitely one of my favorite stories. Keep it going!



Author's Response:

I don't even know what to say.. Wow.  I am incredibly flattered. Thank you so much.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 15 2013 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 7

If there was any remaining doubt that Nicole loves to be the domineering type, it's permanently gone. It's now indisputably obvious that when she wants to have her way on something (or someone), she's going to get it.

No "butts" about it! ;-D

Author's Response:

Ha, exactly!

Reviewer: sundown Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 15 2013 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 7

Wow!!  How devious of Nicole.  Not shocking, but still outright lying to his face.  Great job, I really hope you do another chapter of this theme when Tyler is totally shrunk!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, and you can definitely count on a follow up visit for (a smaller) Tyler in the future :)

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 15 2013 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 7

Woah, wait a second. That was pretty intense. But still a good chapter nonetheless.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I try to have Tyler come across as fairly obstinate so it gives Nicole plenty of opportunities to do some pretty intense things to get through to him :)

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2013 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

It's nice to see Nicole actually loves (too strong of a word maybe?) Tyler right now. She's in her protective, adoring phase. But what happens when bitchy, dominating Nicole rears her head?

The future holds many secrets. Great story so far. No faults I could find.

Reviewer: ZeR0x Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2013 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

Fucking amazing.

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