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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2013 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 6

Suitably tender cliff-hanger. :-)

Reviewer: Nsolo6672 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2013 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please do not NOT finish this story! This is a fantastic story and it reads as if it was written by a seasoned veteran. Thank you for your contribution!

Reviewer: Javert Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2013 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 5

Wow.  This story is off to an excellent start.  Great work.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25 2013 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 5

It looks like they'll both get what they secretly want, in the end.

Reviewer: Intention Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24 2013 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

You certainly know how to build up a relationship early on. Since you know how to do this, could you take a look at my story and leave an honest opinion on it? You don't have to but I would very much like feedback from another author so experienced at this.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2013 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 4

Just a fantastic chapter I loved all the details. This story is just phenomenal. Well done.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thank you!  so glad you like it..

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2013 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

(Hacking into site system. Changing star count to 1000. Gives a thousand stars.) Darn! It still only shows up as 5! But more to the point.

Slow shrinking ho! Nicole is one of those gentleevil giantess' that can change at a moment's notice. Loving it man!



Author's Response:

5 is plenty, thank you :)  And yes, I want to make sure Nicole keeps Tyler on his toes throughout.  If he isn't under hers, anyway........

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2013 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 4

Let the slow shrinking commence!

Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2013 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

You've got a very good thing going here.  You take decent time to get the characters established without compromising the flow of the action, so your characters feel fully fleshed out by the time things start getting busier.  Keep it up.



Author's Response:

I'll be trying, thanks!  All your contributions here were a big factor in me trying to make this small one so thank you.

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2013 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good chapters and dialogue. If I didn't know any better, I would say you've been writing on this site for a while. Hard to believe this is only your first story.



Author's Response:

Thanks dudeman, I have been reading stories here for quite a while..  I've never had much motivation to write but it felt like a contribution was long overdue.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2013 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 3

So, the hanky-panky will be delayed another chapter. That just whets our appetites all the more. Doesn't it?

;-)

Author's Response:

Good guess, I just uploaded chapter 4 with said hanky-panky, haha.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2013 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 2

I repeat: hanky-panky. ;-D

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2013 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

Two words: hanky-panky. ;-D

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2013 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

Two words: hanky-panky. ;-D

Reviewer: Intention Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2013 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

I must say, being your first story this is very enticing. I myself am fond of slow character building before any actual shrinking occurs. I see tons of new stories uploaded a day, but this is the most promising out of all. I can't wait to see where you are taking this with the giantess scenario. I am definitely going to keep tabs on this story.



Author's Response:

Really makes it a lot easier for me to write when I know people are waiting for more.. thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: sm7in Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2013 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 3

Aside from this story capturing my attention without any hint of giantess yet and flowing quite well, it also has me chuckling from time to time in a manner that is not only unexpected and different, but also at times sexually exciting, such as the last few sentences here in chapter 3. Well done.

 

I look forward to more! :D



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, that part of the story is coming soon I promise.  I'm already finding it hard to find a place for humor, but I will keep your comments in mind going forward because I also think it can add a lot to a story.  Thanks again.

Reviewer: sundown Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2013 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 3

Wow.  such engrossing dialogue!!  Please, please continue.

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