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Reviewer: supernatural Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21 2013 11:28 PM Title: Prologue

a very agreeable opening like always, keep it up. it makes me want to pimp slap my government for trying to controle every one els and and the same time sounds fun.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'll try to keep it fun and lighthearted, as soon as the 'serious' opening chapters are done.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21 2013 12:02 AM Title: Prologue

 

A 16yr old girl with a 22yr old BF? damn thats one fun future. lol



Author's Response:

Yup, :) standards will have changed a lot by then!

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2013 7:31 PM Title: Prologue

Nice to see you come out with another piece of work Malaka. I know I'm going to follow this story.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm looking forward to hear what you think of it.

Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2013 7:15 PM Title: Prologue

As usual, it's very refreshing to see a work by you pop up.  You have a very uncommon sense of how to establish an emotional connection for your main characters very early on without needing a whole lot of prefacing.  I enjoy your works in general but I particularly like those of yours that take place in a roughly modern setting, and this one looks to be a very solid piece.  Keep it up.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Stories with a modern setting are easier to write, but the reason I prefer to write stories with a fantasy/old world setting is because they are more what I like to read. I like to change it up every now and then, though.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2013 5:28 PM Title: Prologue

Its a little hard to tell where your going with this story from only the first chapter but its a good start so far.



Author's Response:

The next chapter will go directly into where this story will take place. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2013 4:01 PM Title: Prologue

Neat idea. An great to see ya back Malaka.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks, aaron!

Reviewer: Quicksilver Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2013 3:47 PM Title: Prologue

You've definitely got my attention.  I can only imagine at this point what percentage of the world ends up shrunken...whether the gas ended up spreading and shrinking people from the attacking nations too.  Really looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Looks like you thought of something the enemy army didn't, lol! Great review, thanks!

Reviewer: blackhawk Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2013 3:35 PM Title: Prologue

I have always like the idea of an enemy army shrinking people. Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thank you, hope what follows doesn't disappoint.

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