Date: February 13 2013 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
"Finding nothing, I resorted to rubbing her gently against the fabric of my top. Sure, it would get dirty, but I didn’t plan on wearing it much longer anyway."
Foreshadowing perhaps? Can't help but notice that she keeps thinking of males the size of her finger, in spite of herself! :)
Seriously, one gets the feeling she'll soon take a more proactive role in how this society runs...
Date: February 13 2013 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can sense a lot of emotion in this chapter. it feels more believable than other stoires I've read, except I don't understand why they'd want to build tenples. Given the rapidly increasing amout of irrelgious people today you'd think a future society would be free from superstion but maybe clinging on to existing religions and not a new one.
Author's Response:
Those temples were built by the ancestors of the people in the story (She's been asleep for that long). The people she is with now don't think she's a god anymore. Also, society has pretty much started from scratch, and most of today's religions are long gone, though some small bits remain.
Date: February 13 2013 2:23 AM Title: Prologue
it's stories like this that remind me of why added you as a favourite author.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Stubbornstain!
[Report This]Date: February 13 2013 12:25 AM Title: Prologue
This story is awesome so far, I love how sassy Katie is, though he IS huge so...yeah. Though she sure likes telling the little people to treat her as an equal, even though she knows how to lay on the threats. Looking forward to new chapters of this, Peace!
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot! She's only threatening the guys who don't seem to like her, but, like she said at the end, she'll try and behave a bit better the next time.
[Report This]Date: February 12 2013 4:07 PM Title: Prologue
Taking advantage of the size difference, go Katie! But at least one little people settlement has to have something better than her(?)
Loving this story so far!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm not sure what you mean by 'better than her' though. Another giant person, perhaps? Just curious
[Report This]Date: February 04 2013 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
loving it! The post apocalyptic world has always been an idea of mine, but I never could make it into a gts story. But you've done it perfectly.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the praise, lol!The idea just sort of came to me one night of doing a post-apocalyptic story, so I thought I'd give it a shot.
[Report This]Date: February 04 2013 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
Awesome to see you writing again. I`m liking this new story. Your pacing with how she's dealing with the lost of the life she knew feels spot on. I wonder if this story will be a series of events trying to fit into this village, or a series of places looking for a place that fits.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the great review! The story will be about all the challenges that Katie will have to face, so it won't just be about her trying to fit into the lives of the villagers.
Date: February 04 2013 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
And now the fun begins as she enters the tiny society. I love these types of stories where the giantess tries to find a way to live in a miniature world. I also like the idea of the strange new animals and plants. A result of nuclear fallout perhaps?
Author's Response:
Not really nuclear fallout, just the result of evolution in a world where humans no longer dominate. I know evolution doesn't really work that fast, but I thought it was a cool idea
[Report This]Date: February 03 2013 5:06 PM Title: Prologue
Im liking this story a lot so far, great new chapter by the way!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: February 03 2013 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 2
Sooner or later, she's going to start thinking... if guys were chocolate bars before, they're like M&M's now...
Author's Response:
Yeah, she's going to have to figure out the whole 'relationships with guys' thing all over again.
Date: February 03 2013 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 2
“But…somehow…I don’t think it’ll be that bad. In fact, it might even be kinda fun,” Katie says. Glad that she's coming around to our point of view!
Author's Response:
Yeah, she can't stay miserable forever.
Date: January 29 2013 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting concept! Almost like a sci-fi Gulliver's Travels. I look forward to seeing where you go with this.
Author's Response:
I think you'll enjoy it ;) I might actually mention Gulliver's Travels at some point in the story.
Date: January 29 2013 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Extending the author's plot hint, of course, I suspect the readership here wouldn't mind if the giant girl tore ALL her clothes up to give to the freezing tinies!
Author's Response:
That might be taking it to far, lol! She'd freeze to death herself then.
Date: January 29 2013 2:15 AM Title: Prologue
Sounds amazing please update soon!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'll try my best!
[Report This]Date: January 28 2013 10:06 PM Title: Prologue
What would the general population think if you told them you caught an upskirt view of the goddess you worship? Oh, you also have to mention the minor detail that ahe woke up from her long slumber. I would hope to be crowned High Priest and gain access to more"bonus'" like that.
Do ignore my rambling. Another great chapter Malaka!
Author's Response:
Upskirt views are going to become quite common for the little tinies, I'm guessing! As to the whole goddess thing, Katie's not really all for it. It might be fun for a while , though.
[Report This]Date: January 28 2013 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Remarkable chapter, Malaka. This story is really getting good.
aaron
Author's Response:
Let's hope it get's even better!
[Report This]Date: January 27 2013 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it. I didn't know wht to expect but this seems real good
[Report This]Date: January 27 2013 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Alright!! Another great story by Malaka!! : D This setting seems real interesting; I cannot wait to read more chapters!! Keep the chapters coming!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'll try my best!
Date: January 27 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
I bet the men of this tiny society decided to tear those warmer clothes up a long time ago, explaining that they could provide garments for thousands their size. Well, that was the excuse they gave, at least--I'm sure they didn't mind the fact that if their goddess ever woke up, she'd be stepping over them in a miniskirt.
Author's Response:
Haha, that's a great theory! But while looking up a giant girl's skirt may be easy, she probably won't be pleased when she finds out you did it. Anyway, while they didn't actually taer up her spare clothes, it may be something she decides to do later hersefl, for the reason you just mentioned.
Date: January 27 2013 3:41 PM Title: Prologue
A very promising story. A girl in a skimpy outfit becomes a goddess.
Author's Response:
Actulaay, she'll still be a girl in a skimpy outfit, just a lot bigger than everyone else, lol! Not everyone's going to think she's a goddess.