[Report This]Date: February 12 2013 4:07 PM Title: Prologue
Taking advantage of the size difference, go Katie! But at least one little people settlement has to have something better than her(?)
Loving this story so far!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm not sure what you mean by 'better than her' though. Another giant person, perhaps? Just curious
[Report This]Date: February 04 2013 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
loving it! The post apocalyptic world has always been an idea of mine, but I never could make it into a gts story. But you've done it perfectly.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the praise, lol!The idea just sort of came to me one night of doing a post-apocalyptic story, so I thought I'd give it a shot.
[Report This]Date: February 04 2013 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
Awesome to see you writing again. I`m liking this new story. Your pacing with how she's dealing with the lost of the life she knew feels spot on. I wonder if this story will be a series of events trying to fit into this village, or a series of places looking for a place that fits.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the great review! The story will be about all the challenges that Katie will have to face, so it won't just be about her trying to fit into the lives of the villagers.
Date: February 04 2013 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
And now the fun begins as she enters the tiny society. I love these types of stories where the giantess tries to find a way to live in a miniature world. I also like the idea of the strange new animals and plants. A result of nuclear fallout perhaps?
Author's Response:
Not really nuclear fallout, just the result of evolution in a world where humans no longer dominate. I know evolution doesn't really work that fast, but I thought it was a cool idea
[Report This]Date: February 03 2013 5:06 PM Title: Prologue
Im liking this story a lot so far, great new chapter by the way!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: February 03 2013 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 2
“But…somehow…I don’t think it’ll be that bad. In fact, it might even be kinda fun,” Katie says. Glad that she's coming around to our point of view!
Author's Response:
Yeah, she can't stay miserable forever.
Date: January 29 2013 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting concept! Almost like a sci-fi Gulliver's Travels. I look forward to seeing where you go with this.
Author's Response:
I think you'll enjoy it ;) I might actually mention Gulliver's Travels at some point in the story.
Date: January 29 2013 2:15 AM Title: Prologue
Sounds amazing please update soon!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'll try my best!
[Report This]Date: January 28 2013 10:06 PM Title: Prologue
What would the general population think if you told them you caught an upskirt view of the goddess you worship? Oh, you also have to mention the minor detail that ahe woke up from her long slumber. I would hope to be crowned High Priest and gain access to more"bonus'" like that.
Do ignore my rambling. Another great chapter Malaka!
Author's Response:
Upskirt views are going to become quite common for the little tinies, I'm guessing! As to the whole goddess thing, Katie's not really all for it. It might be fun for a while , though.
[Report This]Date: January 28 2013 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Remarkable chapter, Malaka. This story is really getting good.
aaron
Author's Response:
Let's hope it get's even better!
[Report This]Date: January 27 2013 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it. I didn't know wht to expect but this seems real good
[Report This]Date: January 27 2013 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Alright!! Another great story by Malaka!! : D This setting seems real interesting; I cannot wait to read more chapters!! Keep the chapters coming!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'll try my best!
Date: January 27 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
I bet the men of this tiny society decided to tear those warmer clothes up a long time ago, explaining that they could provide garments for thousands their size. Well, that was the excuse they gave, at least--I'm sure they didn't mind the fact that if their goddess ever woke up, she'd be stepping over them in a miniskirt.
Author's Response:
Haha, that's a great theory! But while looking up a giant girl's skirt may be easy, she probably won't be pleased when she finds out you did it. Anyway, while they didn't actually taer up her spare clothes, it may be something she decides to do later hersefl, for the reason you just mentioned.
Date: January 21 2013 11:28 PM Title: Prologue
a very agreeable opening like always, keep it up. it makes me want to pimp slap my government for trying to controle every one els and and the same time sounds fun.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'll try to keep it fun and lighthearted, as soon as the 'serious' opening chapters are done.
Date: January 21 2013 12:02 AM Title: Prologue
A 16yr old girl with a 22yr old BF? damn thats one fun future. lol
Author's Response:
Yup, :) standards will have changed a lot by then!
[Report This]Date: January 20 2013 7:31 PM Title: Prologue
Nice to see you come out with another piece of work Malaka. I know I'm going to follow this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm looking forward to hear what you think of it.
[Report This]Date: January 20 2013 7:15 PM Title: Prologue
As usual, it's very refreshing to see a work by you pop up. You have a very uncommon sense of how to establish an emotional connection for your main characters very early on without needing a whole lot of prefacing. I enjoy your works in general but I particularly like those of yours that take place in a roughly modern setting, and this one looks to be a very solid piece. Keep it up.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Stories with a modern setting are easier to write, but the reason I prefer to write stories with a fantasy/old world setting is because they are more what I like to read. I like to change it up every now and then, though.
Date: January 20 2013 5:28 PM Title: Prologue
Its a little hard to tell where your going with this story from only the first chapter but its a good start so far.
Author's Response:
The next chapter will go directly into where this story will take place. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: January 20 2013 4:01 PM Title: Prologue
Neat idea. An great to see ya back Malaka.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks, aaron!
Date: January 20 2013 3:47 PM Title: Prologue
You've definitely got my attention. I can only imagine at this point what percentage of the world ends up shrunken...whether the gas ended up spreading and shrinking people from the attacking nations too. Really looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Looks like you thought of something the enemy army didn't, lol! Great review, thanks!