Reviewer: Tinyone234 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2013 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

What a fun story. I absolutely loved the end, it was thrilling, humiliating and lethal all at the same time. Nicely done.

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2013 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 6

Oh I hope this is a smell of a sequel. Loved the story. I really do hope you make a sequel. Maybe one where Cait finds out what is going on and enjoys torturing them. Anyway, I usually don't like unaware stories but this one had me hook line and sinker.

Reviewer: zol Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 5

Finally an update to my favorite story right now in here!! I thought you had abandoned it, so yay :) The chapter was the best so far. I just loved this part:

Rachel let out a bitter laugh, “You should have paid more attention in science.  There’s only 2 ways out.  The first is from where you just came from.  The second would be below you.”

“You mean out her… butt? Ewwwww.”

“God your dense!” Rachel shouted in anger as her voice grew closer and closer.  “We’re going to be digested and then crapped out of her ass!”

Just the way of irony and sarcasm I love the most in stories, really great. Im really curious on what you had in mind for the upcoming next. And I hope you will continue on the story soon :) Keup up the fantastic unaware shrinking stories.

Reviewer: Ronnie Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06 2013 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 4

Really dug this chapter, love the dynamic of one character being aware while the one doing all the destruction is unaware :)

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06 2013 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

Another excelelent chapter I love it when the tinies are trapped within the gts's shoe well done

Reviewer: Senital2011 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

I absolutely love the story. It has that perfect combination of sweet and spice all topped off with that hatred and the satisfaction those who inflicted the pain, being slowly tortured to death. I cant wait for you to finish it.

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13 2013 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

I just realized that the ending of 'The Big Proposal' led to the events of this story! Wow! Now I know how she shrunk her enemies! What genius Kickyou...

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2013 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

Another wonderful chapter.But one suggestion.

When you switch between Caitlyn's/Sammy's viewpoint and the victim's viewpoint, put in a *** or extra spaces to show the change. It was slightly confusing at points, but did not disturb the fact that this is a great story.

Reviewer: zol Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2013 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 2

Finally an update to the one story I am waiting for now so badly. Really great introduction preperations. This for sure will a party with lots of fun, maybe though not for everyone. I dont know if it fits somewhere in what you have planed, maybe there could be an aftermath of the party too with two best friends having a dildo ass play as some kind of birthday surprise, but anyway, this will definitely be great. I really hope you will shortly get into writing the next chapter, when the true fun begins :x

Reviewer: zol Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2013 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

Sorry for the comment after a comment, but I just had to do this after reading it. It's for "I wonder if Sammy is going to eventually tell Caitlyn what she's done so she can relish in her enemies' pain and suffering... I hope so." and I just wanted to say: There are like 99.8% aware "giantess" stories, like 20% of them are micro (about ant size shrinking), and Idk, lets say, maybe again 10% of these 0.2% unaware stories are about one os aware and the other not. Why do the fans of the ~99% aware shrinking stories ALWAYS have to comment on the 0.2% unaware stories things like "I hope they still become aware at some point^^". Can't those people stay away from the are unaware fandome and leave them to the (already unhappy) unaware fans dammit? I hope the auhtor will NOT let Caityln become aware of what Sammy did for her, it makes everything so much better. Thats the whole point of unaware, letting the suffering of the shrunken charcters being even more pointless, especially here, where they have deserved it for mocking and bullying Caitlyn for so long. Letting it be Caityln herself who will let her bullys suffer and not be aware about it, is just the best idea possible. Letting them vanish from the surface of the earth and never have any sorrows again of being bullied is just great. I loved the idea of what does Sammy for her friend. I was bullied too over some point in my life at high school, and I always wished they could get just vanish away, but yeah. I really look forward into this story now, I just loved the introduction. The reader could really get into the whole point of the story, even if there never was used the word shrinking or hint to it at all yet. I hope the story will be a combination of every other great story of yours yet, like Twin trouble and Let the Games Begin/The Games are never over. At some point if the two girls are alone now, it would be be great seeing some fun for her surprise birthday party like some anal dildo play, but I didnt know if you had this planned for this story. Also I hope there maybe will be some full trip too containing digestion and after math on the toilett a day later. Keep writing, and stay unaware (=