[Report This]Date: January 07 2014 1:08 AM Title: Day 8
*rubs his eyes*
Betty is somehow behind something bigger than she's leading on but I can wait to find out.
[Report This]Date: January 06 2014 11:01 PM Title: Day 8
Had to reread it but this story great. So glad you've posted it.
aaron
[Report This]Date: January 06 2014 7:27 PM Title: Day 8
I loved this story when it first came out, and its great to see it return. All the different and changing situations keep it interesting, and you've managed to make a reality show that's interesting precisely because it's scripted. That twist at the end was excellent, and I want to see what Annie does. It seemed like Sandra was going to win and become Betty's partner, but at this point Annie's more likely and anything can happen. Keep this story going.
Date: January 06 2014 5:16 PM Title: Day 1
Love to see this story continued cannot wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: January 28 2013 11:32 AM Title: Day 7 - Night
Great chapter. Hope that Sandra will try to take advantage of her subjects by making them rub her feet, paint her toenails/finger nails, just doing stuff to throw her weight around. Anyways hope to see more from this story.
aaron
[Report This]Date: January 23 2013 5:26 AM Title: Day 7 - Night
I love Betty.
[Report This]Date: January 17 2013 7:36 PM Title: Day 7 - Part 2
*turns the channel once things switch from this Ally McBeal or whatever awful show follows it*
Do come back soon I have my popcorn at the ready.
[Report This]Date: January 13 2013 5:22 PM Title: Day 7 - Part 1
I am getting a sexier/less violent Jigsaw vibe from Betty.
Very much looking forward to seeing where this one goes.
[Report This]Date: January 13 2013 10:29 AM Title: Day 7 - Part 1
Great chapter.
An if Serine feels like she isn't going to be queen anymore, she should force the tinies to rub her feet and give a pedicure, lol.
aaron
Date: January 12 2013 4:54 PM Title: Day 1
liking it so far cant wait to see how it continues developing
[Report This]Date: January 11 2013 4:54 PM Title: Day 1
Wow lots of cool stuff going on in this story, from the alliances being formed, the bouts of loyalty, to Betty's hidden motives. Love it a lot, I'm rooting for Annie!
Date: January 11 2013 12:52 PM Title: Day 1
I wonder what Betty is up to now that she has one of them will she get the rest.
Date: January 11 2013 6:09 AM Title: Day 1
For the first time I didn't like this chapter . 4 inches people and normal people should be kept in the same room
[Report This]Date: January 11 2013 3:37 AM Title: Day 6 - Night
Betty is kind of like a really sexy version of the Crypt Keeper...well maybe not as evil depending on what she does with the rest.
[Report This]Date: January 10 2013 8:51 PM Title: Day 6
I'm also getting bad vibes from Betty now.
This is definitely on my list come December 31st lol.
[Report This]Date: January 10 2013 1:47 PM Title: Day 6
Fantastic chapter. Just wish that Serine would have more fun being 'queen' with her tiny subjects. Now Sherri an Tom are little playthings for Betty. I wish that Sandra would have been the giantess 'queen' though. At any rate I can't wait to see what happens next.
aaron
[Report This]Date: January 09 2013 10:28 PM Title: Day 5
Amazing story, keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: January 09 2013 9:06 PM Title: Day 5
I'm starting to dig Serine but sue kind of took a bit of a bad but not -bad- turn towards the end.
Still excellent read and if I'm pulling for anyone it's likely her.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: January 09 2013 4:24 PM Title: Day 5
Story is getting better. I like how the chapters got longer and longer.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks! From here on out, each days will be broken into two or more chapters because I don't want to go more than about 10 MS Word pages per chapter.
[Report This]Date: January 08 2013 9:40 AM Title: Day 1
I've been wanting to review this story for a while and should have done so! It started out slow but from the get go I loved the premise and found the characters really well done. As the chapters went on I loved how every character seemed to develop their own different personality and thats something alot of stories fail. The interactions between people and the realistic raltionships is just amazing and its honestly the reason why I'm following your story almost religously!
Onto more positives! As the chapters have gone to I love the character development. Slowly seeing both Dave and Sheri enjoying this power they have but wanting to hide this from others. I really want to see how the relationships develop and who ends up dominating who. Its nice to see tinies also having different outlooks. Cameron being a bit shy and nervous compared to Bill who actually seems to love it. Its very cool.
Onto what I hope to see! I'm generally a cruel fan and would love to see a bit of cruetly and domination in there. Of course anything too rough such as killing would be out of the question but maybe the game allows for entrapment and some form of abuse as it was they signed in for? Sorry I just love cruetly and advocate it wherever possible!!!
The only negative I have for the story is how the relationship between Sheri and Tom happened. I felt it was a bit sudden and considering she was lusting after Cameron just before was a bit WTF? for me. Just seemed a bit sudden is all. Still loving it though!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it so far! Yes, at first I was just "stretching my legs" so to speek and it took a few chapters for me to really get into writing this. As far as cruelty, I don't want to spoil anything but you might like some things that are coming up in a few chapters! And yes, I know the relationships in this story can change rapidly and don't always make a lot of sense. Most of these characters tend to be a little fickle with their romantic interests.