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Date: January 23 2013 5:26 AM Title: Day 7 - Night

I love Betty.

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Date: January 17 2013 7:36 PM Title: Day 7 - Part 2

*turns the channel once things switch from this Ally McBeal or whatever awful show follows it*

Do come back soon I have my popcorn at the ready.

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Date: January 13 2013 5:22 PM Title: Day 7 - Part 1

I am getting a sexier/less violent Jigsaw vibe from Betty.

 

Very much looking forward to seeing where this one goes.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2013 10:29 AM Title: Day 7 - Part 1

Great chapter.
An if Serine feels like she isn't going to be queen anymore, she should force the tinies to rub her feet and give a pedicure, lol.

aaron

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Date: January 11 2013 3:37 AM Title: Day 6 - Night

Betty is kind of like a really sexy version of the Crypt Keeper...well maybe not as evil depending on what she does with the rest.

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Date: January 10 2013 8:51 PM Title: Day 6

I'm also getting bad vibes from Betty now.

This is definitely on my list come December 31st lol.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2013 1:47 PM Title: Day 6

Fantastic chapter. Just wish that Serine would have more fun being 'queen' with her tiny subjects. Now Sherri an Tom are little playthings for Betty. I wish that Sandra would have been the giantess 'queen' though. At any rate I can't wait to see what happens next.

aaron

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Date: January 09 2013 10:28 PM Title: Day 5

Amazing story, keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Date: January 09 2013 9:06 PM Title: Day 5

I'm starting to dig Serine but sue kind of took a bit of a bad but not -bad- turn towards the end.

 

Still excellent read and if I'm pulling for anyone it's likely her.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2013 4:24 PM Title: Day 5

Story is getting better. I like how the chapters got longer and longer.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks! From here on out, each days will be broken into two or more chapters because I don't want to go more than about 10 MS Word pages per chapter.

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Date: January 08 2013 5:35 AM Title: Day 4

Still enjoy this greatly.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Date: January 07 2013 6:15 AM Title: Day 3

This I would watch...as-long as Jeff Probst didn't host.



Author's Response:

lol, don't worry he's not here.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2013 2:06 PM Title: Day 2

So far the first canidate for my top ten of 2013.

 

Excellent start.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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