Date: January 07 2013 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
Ohhh wow, this was unusual. I must say, not a bad story even though stuff like this isn't my style.
Just... Gruesome ya know?
Author's Response: Yes, that's what I was going for. Soon enough, I'll be coming up with stories that appeal to everyone.
Date: January 07 2013 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 3
A much better chapter, good work.
Date: January 07 2013 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 2
It's a shame the chapters are so short, but I'm starting to like this story.
Date: January 07 2013 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
How come you only actually describe Courtney in details? Aren't the other characters important?
Author's Response: Sorry to disappoint, but I'm saving more character detail and background for later. Courtney, as you found in chapter three, had to be explained much more early on. Don't you worry, you'll get to know the characters much better sooner or later.
Date: January 07 2013 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 3
Mwahahahaha! I laugh at their misery! I'm surprised Matt hasn't puked yet, and I doubt that Hope will be alive IF they find her...
[Report This]Date: January 05 2013 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hey, just to help but there is a respond button at the bottom of every comment. Use that to respond.
Just sayin...
Author's Response: Just realized that yesterday.. Lol but thanks for helping, it really does mean a lot.
Date: January 05 2013 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
:) Glad you said that, I have just the thing coming up pretty soon.
Date: January 04 2013 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
(^_^)/ Looking forward to the sick and twisted stuff you can come up with. Just a reminder, dismembering screaming people in front of friends and/or family is always interesting. Mwahahahaha!
[Report This]Date: January 04 2013 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wondering when the GTS content will come in. Aside from being a short chapter, not bad.
[Report This]Date: January 04 2013 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well, I'm not sure about this. Not being a gory fan, I just don't know. But as a reviewer, not a bad intro. Some dialogue was a bit jumbled. Only thing I saw.