[Report This]Date: January 10 2013 4:48 PM Title: A 'Little' Talk
??? that was unexpected. Im assuming she is bipolar or something because her personality changed quick. Im hoping u have next ch Friday morning fingers crossed lol. great ch
Author's Response:
Bipolar lol. No it's what I call The GTS Phenomenon. When a woman has such power over a man, it can change her really quickly.
But don't worry, she's not going to be cruel throughout the story.
Maybe only another chapter or 2. (Out of like 40 or so. I don't know how long this story is going to be.)
[Report This]Date: January 10 2013 3:56 PM Title: Doctor's Visit
The GF part was actually a surprise for me.
Author's Response:
Really? I guess it was a little unexpected.
[Report This]Date: January 10 2013 3:45 PM Title: Doctor's Visit
sibling rivalries is usually the focus with these stories. I like when a author decides to give them a good relationship. It makes the story more realistic. I mean I dont have any problems with my sisters.
Author's Response:
I see too many sibling rivalry stories and not enough Gentle Family interactions. I took the task up and so far, people seem to like it.
[Report This]Date: January 08 2013 7:36 PM Title: A 'Little' Talk
My first thought was: Holy Shit!! Than after I calmed down, an reread this chapter. I am just let wondering. I mean I just can't get over what Angela did to him, granted he shouldn't have left the basket but what Angela did to him is inexcusable an will be hard to be forgiven. How will he not have brain damage, a blood clot or something from the massive head trauma he sustained. Well at any rate, what happens next I am hooked to this story. An can't wait to see how the next chapter progresses.
aaron
Author's Response:
Not MASSIVE head trauma. Just a little. I knew this chapter would surprise well, everyone The aftermath I hope will be enjoyable. I plan on uploading it Thursday, maybe Friday if I have any problems.
Angela just had that moment of complete power and it overtook her mind making her cruel and noncaring for her brother.
[Report This]Date: January 08 2013 5:22 PM Title: A 'Little' Talk
Dude,
Dang! He is in deep shit now! He better learn how to rub feet faster than that!
I'm intriged, with this and even the GODDESS IS SMILING DOWN ON YOU!
Keep it up! *wild-cat*
Author's Response:
Right now, he's incapable of moving. To give him credit, he tried to the best of his abilities but he was just TOO overwhelmed. He tried.
Don't worry. He's fine...
[Report This]Date: January 08 2013 5:12 PM Title: Meet The Griffins
No sibling rivalry, huh? She almost killed him. Not that Im complaining, but damn, he definitely did not deserve that.
Author's Response:
Not sibling rivalry, I guess it's kinda hard to explain. Sibling rivalry is where they hate each other. These two don't hate each other but Angela had such complete power over Andrew it kind of made her lose her mind for a bit (hence the plug metaphor I put in). But this is definitely not a sibling rivalry.
It's ok, I don't think he deserved it either. But it was still fun to write.
[Report This]Date: January 08 2013 4:54 PM Title: A 'Little' Talk
Loving this story :D
Author's Response:
Thanks man. Its always nice to see reviews like this.
Also, there's going to be a lot more to love.
Date: January 06 2013 8:52 PM Title: Meet The Griffins
Wow, this is really pretty good! If the actual discriptions were more defined, as in (How his girlfriend handles him, ya know, like,.. I don't know, maybe.....( Her tremendious size overwhelmed his view as the magnificent EYE peered at him with the dialating spirals inside, exspanding and contracting as they focused in on his puny little form....
Maybe something like that? I don't know thought, just a suggestion?
*wildcatman*
Author's Response:
Wow, that's pretty descriptive. I'll think it over and try it in chapter 5.
Glad you seem to take an interest in this story too. (LOL)
[Report This]Date: January 05 2013 10:23 PM Title: Differences in Love?
Excellent chapter. Loved how Tanya reacted to Andrew. Did I understand right? Is Tanya really breaking up with him?
An now what will Angela have in store for him in her room? But whatever it is I can't wait to see what happens next.
aaron
PS glad you were able to post this chapter early.
Author's Response:
Umm, no they're not breaking up. It's kind of complex right now but I'll clear it up in later chapters.
And I can guarantee you are going to enjoy chapter 5.
[Report This]Date: January 02 2013 7:27 PM Title: Meet The Griffins
Dude,
Im Interested in where that box came from? I hope it gets a lot more use!
*wildcatman*
Author's Response:
I have a few ideas.
[Report This]Date: January 02 2013 1:35 PM Title: Meet The Griffins
Definitely a good start and I'm a big fan of shrinking within the family. I'm glad it doesn't seem to be a brother was a jackass to sister and now he's shrunk leaving her to get vengeance kind of plot.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot! Coming from you that means a lot. Im a big fan of your stories and am glad you like mine.
Expect a lot more coming.
[Report This]Date: January 02 2013 9:39 AM Title: Meet The Griffins
This chapter was great. I love this idea for a story. Will there be some gentle foot/toe play between him and his mom? An she seems like the type to take time off from work to be with her son. An I'm also looking forward to the interactions between him and his sister too.
But I can't believe nothing was said about him peeing on his mom, unless she just didn't want to embarrass him further... But all in all fantastic start to this story.
aaron
ps thank you very much for the stellar review of my tale
Author's Response:
Ok 3 things I have to say.
1. Nothing was said between his wetting himself because she knew why he did it.
2. You seem to like foot play. I'll try to add some in somewhere. Right now I'm taking it slow.
3. I have good plans for his sister and him.
Thanks for the review.