Date: January 12 2013 4:35 PM Title: introducing the characters
hope this story continues but i do agree upon less chapters like the last one it tends to be disconcerting to see her like that
Date: January 11 2013 1:38 PM Title: introducing the characters
You could have her sewn into someones clothing...bra or panties and worn by an unknowing user
[Report This]Date: January 07 2013 8:19 AM Title: introducing the characters
Again, I'm loving the progress. I'm hoping that she tattles to Emma and gets in real trouble with Stacy.
[Report This]Date: January 06 2013 7:07 PM Title: introducing the characters
Like the story, although a bit too much emphasis of farting & shitting! Would like to see other ways to humiliate her! How about feet? Making her sniff/lick their feet, as well as their friends (Amy's), I thought it was going this way with the red heads socks!
Or maybe introduce some spanking, would be so humiliating for Kate to be spanked by Amy or Stacey! Or they could take a shower with her, make her wash them with a sponge, as they tower over her!
How about having her played with a bit more, like Emma touching her, feeling her up etc! Would be humiliating is one of the sisters managed to make her orgasm!
Date: January 06 2013 5:49 PM Title: introducing the characters
wow, great story. kate definately needs to be treated like a baby by her sisters - diapers and all. maybe she could keep shrinking until she is only a couple of inches tall. rebecca could then eat her or stuff her in her diaper (maybe even make her sisters unaware of such a predicament until it's too late.)
[Report This]Date: January 06 2013 12:18 AM Title: introducing the characters
Only complaint is the chapters feel short. More depth and interaction as she gets smaller would be great. When she gets small enough, unawares would be a fun angle, too.
Date: January 05 2013 2:55 PM Title: introducing the characters
Love story like that <3 ! :D
Continue sooo Good ;) !
Date: January 05 2013 10:42 AM Title: introducing the characters
I personally would love to see some vore in this, or at least some vore tease. I think it would go well with the controlling aspect as she gets smaller. Like Amy teasing her about turning her into a fart xD Great story!
Author's Response:
great suggestion. i am planning on doing a bit of vore i just needed kate small enough to do that. i will also be doing a lot of teasing so don't worry. thanks for the suggestions and review.
Date: January 01 2013 8:11 PM Title: introducing the characters
This is a fantastic start. You've achieved a realistically depicted sadism, and I'm very keen to see future updates!
Author's Response:
i hope you enjoy the new chapter i just uploaded, and thanks for you compliments. if you have any suggestions or scenarioas you want layed out then just ask.
[Report This]Date: January 01 2013 4:58 PM Title: introducing the characters
Loving this. Really looking forward to seeing more!
Author's Response:
thanks man positive feed back is always appreciated. you might like to know that every chapter from now now will have some type fo torture in store for our little kate. i will also be posting a different, short story, which has similar aspects to this
[Report This]Date: December 31 2012 5:01 PM Title: introducing the characters
I like it. I think you can do good with this story.
Very nice. Just capitalize man. I kind of obsess over spelling and capitalization.
[Report This]Date: December 31 2012 11:57 AM Title: introducing the characters
interesting plot i will definetly stay in tuned
[Report This]Date: December 31 2012 11:57 AM Title: introducing the characters
interesting plot i will definetly stay in tuned
Author's Response:
thanks. it's good to know that my story has people liking it one the first chapter. i hope you continue t enjoy it as we get into the more juicy stuff.