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Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2012 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good story.
However, I suggest that you clean up the spelling and grammar before you submit it as part of your college assignment. 

 

 

Reviewer: sm7in Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2012 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

Can't say I'm into a Turian giantess, but that's an easy hurtle to pass by just imagining her a hot human giantess :)

 

Nice first chapter; short and sweet, fun to read.

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