[Report This]Date: November 29 2013 6:20 PM Title: Salsa
To paraphrase Robert DeNiro from LAST VEGAS: "The only one who can make fun of my kid sister is me."
As for the next chapter? It'll probably be the last one, at the rate things are going (so badly), here. :-(
[Report This]Date: September 12 2013 10:01 AM Title: Spider
Hmmmmmmm! Maybe Our Little Hero will develop the arachnoid ability to climb vertical surfaces and/or sense imminent danger. Thereby allowing him to meet these suddenly much greater responsibilities. ;-D
Date: September 11 2013 9:13 PM Title: Spider
What's Jessica going to do to him, or will he get away.
But nice chapter, though they are short. But you do post chapter frequently so it makes up for it.
[Report This]Date: September 10 2013 9:06 AM Title: In Her Room
She's shrinking little kids, now?! OK; it's official. Jessica has totally voyaged around the bend!
Author's Response: Yes, she is an insane one, isn't she? But the next few chapters will make EVEN YOU surprised Carycomic! (or at least I hope.) If you think Jessica is an insane cruel monster now, just wait! There's even MORE!
Date: September 09 2013 9:29 PM Title: In Her Room
Nice chapter, I really feel bad for the dog.
Hopefully nothing bad going to happen to the hero, ha I'm just fooling myself.
Author's Response: Don't worry, like all dogs in all movies and books, the dog will make it! At least until the end.......... Or not....... DUN DUN DUN!
[Report This]Date: August 07 2013 4:09 PM Title: The Tables Have Turned
Oh I hope they will be alright. Hope doesn't deserve to be shrunkern. Please let her get revenge and have them both restored to normal. Hey, if eternity wants a play toy than they should shrink that little bitch and giver her to eternity.
[Report This]Date: August 07 2013 2:53 PM Title: The Tables Have Turned
Jessica must be an expert at looking for boy-shaped bumps in other girls' pockets. :-(
Author's Response: Sorry, this chapter should have been better. I should have listened to the saying "Don't write when you're not in the mood." I'll make a better chapter.
[Report This]Date: August 06 2013 6:32 PM Title: Julian's Plan
Well, just remember the old saying, Julian: "Where there's life, there's Hope."
;-D
[Report This]Date: August 06 2013 3:44 PM Title: Julian's Plan
Great chapter, do I smell revenge in the future?
Date: August 04 2013 5:54 PM Title: The Escape
I feel so bad for the little guy, it must suck to have to hide the truth from people that can probably help you.
[Report This]Date: August 04 2013 3:13 PM Title: Aftershock Pain
Hope is so nice. I am starting to feel for the tiny fella. I hope he pulls through with Hop. No pun intended. Great story.
[Report This]Date: August 04 2013 1:49 PM Title: Aftershock Pain
Whew! You had me going there, for a second or two, with that opening nightmare sequence. Good one!
At least, this chapter's cliff-hanger was a relatively peaceful one.
Date: August 02 2013 12:01 PM Title: The Escape
HOW is he STILL alive!! He has a f-ing hole in his chest! And Eternity is just around the corner, waiting to take his life!
Author's Response: Exactly. There's only so much the human body can take. His body is bound to give up some point..... Soon....
[Report This]Date: August 02 2013 11:48 AM Title: Torture Deal
Great chapter, hope the truce doesn't last too long.
[Report This]Date: August 02 2013 7:29 AM Title: Torture Deal
That little beeyotch is exhibiting the classic first stage of growing up to be a serial killer.
[Report This]Date: August 02 2013 7:27 AM Title: Lost and Found
It'll be a miracle if the next chapter isn't the final one (for this guy, anyway).
[Report This]Date: August 01 2013 7:41 PM Title: Lost and Found
Oh I wonder what Eternity will do. At least one person still sees him as a toy. I just hope their mom or hope donot find out.
Date: August 01 2013 7:10 PM Title: The Escape
Eternity is such a bitch, I hope someone helps him out, or he's gonna be a goner.
Date: July 31 2013 4:45 PM Title: In the Inner workings of the House
Mouse trap, ugh oh!
[Report This]Date: July 31 2013 8:57 AM Title: In the Inner workings of the House
Great to see this story updated. Doesn't look like you lost your touch. I wonder if he will make it or will he be forever a toy. Personally I hope for the later.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm updating some of my stories. I haven't been on since like, December last year.