[Report This]Date: June 23 2018 8:08 AM Title: Rewards of Working Hard
I liked the story I just wished his ex and his teacher why hint around about it that was a big disappointment and his aunt did she have to be fat that was gross I hated that part you wrote about alison that was a let down you should have more of her not just at the end
[Report This]Date: August 12 2017 4:25 PM Title: Prologue
please don't stop when it just started getting good!
Date: June 27 2015 12:38 PM Title: Prologue
wish u do another sequel when he has a girl freind
[Report This]Date: January 30 2013 11:09 PM Title: Rewards of Working Hard
Nice to see this story continued!
Author's Response:
Agreed! Appreciate it the concurrence lol :D
Author's Response:
Agreed! Appreciate the concurrence lol :D
[Report This]Date: January 30 2013 10:50 PM Title: Prologue
For that cat picture I am just confused. Is it supposed to mean something...
The only reasonable answer.
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[Report This]Date: January 30 2013 3:34 PM Title: Prologue
And you're back! Seems like he's finally crossed the line where shits just aren't givin anymore about what happens to him. Which could open up a lot of new possibilities.
Ideas, ideas...
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Date: January 20 2013 10:30 AM Title: Prologue
I absolutely love this story, and I hope to see more from it sometime soon (and its counterpart too!)
Author's Response:
I hope to find the motivation to write for each of them! lol. Not a writer, but by the power of Grayskull I will finish them!
Date: January 02 2013 8:16 AM Title: Playing Rough
lovin the boob play
Author's Response:
Right? FTW
[Report This]Date: January 02 2013 3:44 AM Title: Playing Rough
ugh, I know its a story but I always get pissed off. I mean its a good story but he dosent have to get shit on my his family all the time. I hate when they think their helping when all their doing is using him, its kind of sad. again good story thats just my take on the story so far
Author's Response:
I totally empathize, but to get the kind of action me and Chaos are looking for in just the right way, this was what we thought we be the best means of getting there.
Given its a fantasy erotica, we thought it held together pretty well so far, lol. I am glad that despite these frustrations, it is quite enjoyable. Don't worry, Steve's life get's easier.
[Report This]Date: January 02 2013 12:14 AM Title: Playing Rough
Please continue this story!
Author's Response:
Please continue the Macho! More to come, we're just currently on hiatus with another project.
[Report This]Date: December 29 2012 1:26 AM Title: Playing Rough
I love where this one is going.
Please continue...
Author's Response:
Oh we will, we're just on a little hiatus while we work on another project :D
[Report This]Date: December 28 2012 11:31 PM Title: Playing Rough
Leave a review. I'd love too!
Alison is such a great sister. She's being so kind to Steve
(sarcastic face off)
Man she's cold, no regret. That sister only wants to please herself, no doubt about it.
Author's Response:
Some true, some not. She's been desensitized to her brother's condition through the years and acts playfully with her brother accordingly, only now that everything is out in the open and he won't come completely clean with it, she's frustrated and proving the point/punishing him. She loves him, but she also wants to play with him and he's being stubborn!
I'm sure there are much better ways at being mean to a little guy then what she's doing :P
Date: December 28 2012 1:42 PM Title: Turn to Actions When Words Fail
I love the physical and psychological dominance that Alison displays over her brother. Steve knows that he is being manipulated, but is only able to respond with hopeless rage and trapped resignation. Excellent narrative, pace and creative details so far. I am also still looking forward to a chapter where Steve is used like a bar of soap by a giantess in the shower. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Me too, lol. When I thought up Alison's character, I wanted her role to be forcefully cheerful and playful without being any sort of sex fiend and Chaos digs her that way with the contrast it makes to Steve's mom Kady, which we like being the loving, well-intentioned but sexually craving figure. I swear there is a shower time to come, just wait for it! It's will happen, promise ;)
[Report This]Date: December 28 2012 8:43 AM Title: Turn to Actions When Words Fail
I can't help but think of Jacksmith's A Little Blackmail when I read this chapter. This is a really good chapter.
Author's Response:
That's saying a lot: Jacksmith's stuff is really well written! 'Preciate it! I know Chaos does too!
[Report This]Date: December 28 2012 8:38 AM Title: Prologue
I've got to say, your responses are probably the best ones on the site.
I laughed hard when I saw the picture. And my assessment is,
This is the better one.
Author's Response:
Hah, calm down now, you still have to buy me dinner before I'll put out :P
Sounds like a good call, Chaos will be happy to read that! I feel like I suffer from dementia everytime I talk about Chaos in comments, lol. Should get that checked, make sure it is someone else who is writing the other chapters...
Date: December 28 2012 8:07 AM Title: Turn to Actions When Words Fail
more feet, and piss and poop!
Author's Response:
I can't gaurantee much feet, it's not really my thing, but I will put some in because I know it means a lot to a lot of other people. As to the piss and poop, I can dig it as long as I don't see a photo, I just don't want to saturate the story with too much of it, lol. There will be some chapters to come just for you sir. Promise.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2012 10:48 PM Title: Some Help in Self-Confession
I can't wait to see where this goes. I like both stories hut I don't know which is better.
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[Report This]Date: December 27 2012 10:46 PM Title: No Secrets From Sister
Damn it. You should really let him control his own size. I know I have asked that like 4 times, but again, if you did do that, the reactions from the sister and mom would be amazing if that happened.
Author's Response:
Where's the fun in that? :P I agree, it would introduce quite a few fun and interesting developments to the story if he had or soon finds the ability to control his size. Maybe an idea to keep in mind as we write this, I think.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2012 10:43 PM Title: Damage Report
Hmm, maybe my wish is coming true. Maybe he's learning to control himself!
Or maybe his experience with his mom crushed any arousal for anything else. One of the two.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2012 10:40 PM Title: A Mother's Dilemma
I desperately wish he could consciously change his size as easily as the women can. But oh well...