Reviewer: grimehead Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2012 12:14 AM Title: Morning

This story is really interesting so far, I especially like all of Mia's teasing and the scene with the gummy bear being deposited in her panties.

 

Your English is pretty good and your writing is so far a lot better than a lot of stories I've read on this site.

 

I look forward to reading more of this and hope there are a lot of micro scenes!

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 6:43 PM Title: Lottery winner

He hasn't even shrunk yet and I think this story is amazing!  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 4:59 PM Title: Morning

Dear god, for a first story, this is excellent. I think you sir are awesome.

Reviewer: sm7in Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 12:57 PM Title: Morning

Loved it! Great turning point with the gummy bears and a delightful dive into the story being sexual without there being anything truly sexual yet between them. Excited to see more about how the summer goes and what she has in mind.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 11:33 AM Title: Breakfast

 

How old are they? im not sure u put down any descriptions. If u did that on purpose than ok.

Reviewer: voredom227 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 10:37 PM Title: Morning

Brilliant first chapter, really looking forwards to seeing what she actually does to him when he shrinks down.

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 7:48 PM Title: Morning

I like it. Just keep it going and I think this could be one of the best stories here!

Reviewer: Afroking Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 7:27 PM Title: Morning

good story I like the setup of the shring ray lottery  

ps.How do stop being a lurker?!

Ive tried for 5yrs, and i've only read GTS for about a yr and a 1/2. Its hard to make a story when I could just read stories lol. thx for posting.  

 

Author's Response:

Lol, what I find interesting in actually writing the stories, is that it is also exciting to actually fantasies to where the story can go. Try it ;) Or not, been a lurker for quite some time, so I know what you mean ;)

Reviewer: LilBinary Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 3:49 PM Title: Morning

This was amazing. If you continue like this, this may end up being my most favorite story of all time.

Please don't make us wait long for an update. And I hope you make it a nice long story.

 

an

Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words! I will try and update as often as I can, depending on free time!