Date: December 16 2012 8:59 PM Title: Morning
This is awesome. Best story I have read in a long time, can't wait for it all to start!
[Report This]Date: December 16 2012 6:52 PM Title: The box
Hey Yougts, just wanted to say I'm an avid fan of the story, I really like the plans she has in store for her brother, and the bra cup crevice.
I hope you wouldn't be adverse to some benign butt crushing or bottom smothering? Any direction this story goes is golden. The giantesses attitude really works.
[Report This]Date: December 16 2012 1:36 PM Title: Morning
Great as always. Hell, I could learn a lot from you about writing. This is an excellent story
Date: December 15 2012 10:04 PM Title: Morning
I'm glad I found the story just now that it already has 5 chapters ;) I loved the way she teased him in chapters 1-4.. so hot! Also, "incest"-stories often come over a bit creepy, maybe ugly, but you let none of that slide in. Great :)
I like that Mia shares her brother's fetish, or rather that hers is the perfect match for his. Hopefully she won't be cruel - a bit (or a hole big lot of) teasing is superb, but I also love the setting that this seems to be about siblings just experimenting, not one enslaving the other for the rest of his life.
Date: December 15 2012 1:52 PM Title: Time to shrink
One of the best stories i have read in a while, really hope for a new chapter soon.
[Report This]Date: December 14 2012 10:39 PM Title: Morning
Spectacular stuff!
You are really one hell of a good writer. Keep up the excellence!
[Report This]Date: December 14 2012 7:23 PM Title: Time to shrink
This is perfect!! I am really greatful for you Thank you!
[Report This]Date: December 14 2012 5:14 PM Title: Time to shrink
Amazing, Absolulty amazing! I agree the wait is torture but it's well worth it! Id rather wait a day for an amazing chapter then have 5 short horrible chapters.
I'm not a fan of feet or vore but this story has the potential to appeal to everyone. I like the things youve been suggesting, the bra with the hole, tying him to thongs, the gummy bear in the underwear. Can't wait to see what happens first. Hopefully the box he just went in has her sex toys from her dildo, anal beads, thongs, Her modified bra!
[Report This]Date: December 14 2012 4:12 PM Title: Time to shrink
Simply awesome. I love the way the story is heading. You just need to hurry up with the chapters. The wait is torture.
[Report This]Date: December 14 2012 4:10 PM Title: Time to shrink
Simply awesome. I love the way the story is heading. You just need to hurry up with the chapters. The wait is torture.
Date: December 13 2012 7:28 PM Title: Goodbye
That's a very good story! please continue it!
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Date: December 13 2012 8:58 AM Title: Morning
Still amazing.
Make him become his sisters panty-slave !
Date: December 13 2012 4:11 AM Title: Goodbye
Really enjoying this one, can't wait for the next chapter where he shrinks
[Report This]Date: December 13 2012 3:00 AM Title: Goodbye
I've read through the story so far, and I think it's great! :) After the introductory author's notes, your exposition is subtle (which is the sweet spot as far as I'm concerned). Your English is excellent. If you hadn't stated that english is your second language, no one would have ever thought twice.
I especially enjoyed this chapter. Stan's growing nervousness is making me nervous about his future as well.
I'm also excited to learn about the "new features" included with the shrink ray.
Date: December 13 2012 2:15 AM Title: Goodbye
I'm not sure what you enjoy writing, but I certainly suggest you implement the "grain of salt" idea. Would love to see more ACTUAL "micro" on this site. I dont exactly believe 1 inch, or even 1 cm for that matter, should be considered micro. It's a shame that not that much X/R-rated micro is on this site. However, with all due respect, there's still at least 30% of the total content on this site that I have yet to view. Anyways my point is that so far, I've only come across a handful of noteworthy stories that involve the micro scale and have at least some provocative chapter or scene. My vote is not based off of whether you choose to go this route or not. I already love the story and it's just now starting to pick up!! Excellent job by the way. I cannot wait to read what you come up with next!
[Report This]Date: December 13 2012 12:17 AM Title: Goodbye
Great story! Hopefully it ends up with an accidental nourishment of his sister or mom ;-)
Date: December 13 2012 12:16 AM Title: Goodbye
Great story! Hopefully it ends up with an accidental nourishment of his sister or mom ;-)
[Report This]Date: December 12 2012 10:47 PM Title: Goodbye
Wow! What a start! This is extremely well-written, and you are doing an amazing job of whetting my appetite for more. The thought of her torturing tiny Stan under his mom's feet or in her ass without his mom's knowledge is awesome! I am really looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: December 12 2012 8:37 PM Title: Goodbye
I'm really enjoying Mia's character. A little sister who is a dominant tease but at the same time loving and caring. The paragraph where she explains her swimsuit was really arousing. I look forward to a lot more teasing, loving, and erotic stuff from her character.
[Report This]Date: December 12 2012 7:25 PM Title: Goodbye
This is so great! I love giantess sisters and Butts!! And this story has both!!
You have a natrual talent to be a writer!! Keep it up, you will find yourself somewhere at the top later on XD
A seggestion!? uhmmm, I would like to see Mia would keep Stan as her buttplug when she doesn't need to play with him or use him.
Another seggestion, Is about the ending. I would love to see him stay forever as her sex toy. Also, you could add multible endings if have more than one ending in your mind. It is so rare to see stories like that.
Finally, I hate death. But I don't think you'll make Stan die, so it is OK.
That is it for me. Good luck! I can't wait to see chapter 5!!!