Reviewer: Northgate Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2014 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

I just found this story and read it for the first time and all I can say is excellent.  I'm a sucker for a good revenge story and tis had all the right elements.  I liked the fact that Mark kept thinking she might restore him to normal.  Just great pacing and story telling.  It was actually a very simple story told in a great way.  I expecially like the end when Mark realizes how truely screwed he is and what his ultimate fate will be.  Just awesome.  Thanks for sharing.

 

Reviewer: Maximus Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2013 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 4

Jillian, you're awesome! I've had the pleasure of reading this on the other site but it was still just as hot the second time around! (I'm Frost over there).

You guys rating, selecting 5 stars is only 2 1/2, you have to go up to 10 to give it a full rating. No way you guys meant this to only be 2 1/2 stars! 

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was so hot.

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 2

Mark is in a serious bit of trouble here, and the idea of her leading him to beleive that she is going to return him to normal size, ......... a devilish little way to control him mentally as well!          Very clever!   I like this, though, I myself would never 'CHEAT', The Idea of a cheater getting his just due, I do Like, very much!

 

                                                 Keep the storie going, I hope It's a long one, and keep on spinnin them Tale's

                                                                           *wildcatman*