Date: May 01 2019 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please finish this story And Sweat and Tears! They are both lovely stories in different but special ways😭😭d84;
Date: August 02 2018 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
A very nice story
would like to read more
Date: March 13 2014 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Will you ever finish this? it has such amazing potential!
[Report This]Date: December 09 2012 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
The stomach stepping scene alone was worth the read.
Very nice work.
Author's Response:
Thanks, that means a lot.
[Report This]Date: December 09 2012 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
An overly pampered young girl with this kind of power is something to be afraid of.
She probably only cares about her big brother that she loves very very much, which is something cute, I can feel that she would never harm or abuse him but she have no gentle feelings towards those who stand in her way or defy her. Just my opinion.
Big bro will have quite a difficult time raising his not so little and weak sister properly now that she discovered this immense power. And since everything that matters to him is her happiness, as he clearly sacrificed himself for her health, I wonder if he will really try to control her now only to be confronted by his worst enemy, the sad face of his little sister. I can't think that he can win against this one.
Author's Response:
"An overly pampered young girl with this kind of power is something to be afraid of."
Exactly! That's one of the biggest appeals for me in this fetish, not just a woman being large and powerful, but also that she's flawed or immature. Girls, especially younger ones, can be very cruel, but in real life they rarely have the ability (physically at least) to do anything too bad. It's scary and, of course, exciting.
She does love and care about her brother greatly, but she doesn't really know or understand how this all could make him feel. Heh, well, you'll see.
Date: December 09 2012 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
Your right I just got lost into the story a little. Their was alot of emotion going on between them at the end of the ch.
Author's Response:
Hahaha, no problem. I hope my explanation made sense. Thanks as always for being a loyal reader of my stories.
[Report This]Date: December 09 2012 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
NOOO! Im sorry but he gives into her way to easily. At the end of the ch he should have said "we need to talk". She needs discipline lol. going around beating girls up. Big bro has to communicate with her more.
ps sweat&tears? I like the story thx for update
Author's Response:
At the end of the chapter, they're still escaping from the scene of the crime. Both are overwhelmed by what happened and their new situation, and thus aren't going to have a talk just yet. Sorry if that didn't get across very well. The exchange at the end was a sort of strange catharsis in the moment. Big bro's smaller than he's ever been and feels oddly comforted in his sister's grasp, so he's not thinking entirely logically when he replies so simply like that. And of course, well, he can't be that much of a tough guy or the story wouldn't really work at all! He wouldn't admit to being a pushover, but his sis is reallly all he has.
Sweat & Tears is sort of on hold, but I promise I'll finish it. I don't want to work on it right now for a variety of reasons, but I want to to give it a continuation and ending it deserves. In the meantime I'm working on this story, and I have a few short (1 to 2 chapters only) ideas.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: December 08 2012 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just wanted to say I really like the premise of this story, nice work.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hope you like how it develops as well.
Date: December 07 2012 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this is so freaking excellent. So promising! The characters are so solid in my mind, so believable, so awesome. Not jumping into it directly, which just makes it 10 times better.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm really glad that people are finding the character's convincing.
Date: December 07 2012 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
great story so far, the build up and then level of timid control she has over her brother... i'm waiting for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I try not to overdo the buildup, but some is necessary. Thanks for stickng around.
[Report This]Date: December 07 2012 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
I like that she can control his height by giving back to him, it shows that she can still control him. Maybe she can indulge in more hight when they are at home alone.
[Report This]Date: December 06 2012 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Presumably she can also siphon off other qualities, too, along with height: intelligence, identity, equilibrium, musical or athletic talent, sense of place, eye and hair color, skin tone, etc. Am I right?
Author's Response:
Heh, well some of those things, definitely. I do have ideas related to taking things other than height, but that'll have to wait.
[Report This]Date: December 06 2012 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love the concept and the characters, and I hope this story gets updated!
Author's Response:
Thank you! It will, I'm working on it right now. I'm working on my other story too, but just at a slower pace. I don't want a reputation for unfinished stories.
Date: December 06 2012 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like the story but I hope she dosent take full advantage of her brothers kindness. I just hope she stays gentle to her bro.
Author's Response:
Heh, well, we'll see. I do have a clear path imagined for how her character will develop and how she reacts to the change in power dynamic. But as I've said before I find it unrealistic when a girl goes from being nice/normal to completely sadistic for no reason other than she has a tiny person now.
[Report This]Date: December 06 2012 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow this is a very good and interesting set up,
Author's Response:
I'm glad you think so. It's pretty difficult for me to come up with a unique situation (even though I don't necessarily believe you need a unique or even an explained 'catalyst' for the action in these kinds of stories per se).
[Report This]Date: December 06 2012 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very good, I am really anxious for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm working on it now.
[Report This]Date: December 06 2012 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very very promising, I like the concept, I like the setting, I like both of their characters that seem gentle and getting along well, I like the "feet" tag... I'm definitely keeping myself updated about this story, and looking forward to reading more!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I tried to portray the characters as well as I could, it was hard to write the brother because I wanted him to be loving and responsible but not creepy. And yeah, pretty much anything I write will have feet in it, heh.