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Date: December 20 2012 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 18: THE SECRET SISTERHOOD OF G.U.L.P.

18 great chapters down. 30 to go!

:-)

Author's Response:

Several small boys down, more meals to go....

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Date: December 20 2012 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 17: A DEAL'S A MEAL

I wonder what'll happen to Mrs. Long's musical inspiration once she learns Peter is in Penny (instead of a pound).

Author's Response:

How do you do it?

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Date: December 19 2012 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 16: HEADMISTRESS AT THE TOP OF A HILL

"Would you like me to eat you?"

That's like asking Sinead O'Connor if she'd like to be the first woman Pope!

Author's Response:

Well if Mrs Yeo asked me, I'd say yes.

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Date: December 19 2012 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 15: GARTIN DECLINES

So, I underestimated the chapter count. This was still a good read. Especially the astounding way you keep track of the multitudinous characters!

Author's Response:

Yes, who's been eaten. Who's somehow survived being eaten?

Who wants to be eaten?

Who doesn't?

etc etc.

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Date: December 19 2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 14: ZAYNI'S IN-SIGHT

Wow! I can hardly believe I read the past three chapters in one sitting! Then, again: I guess it just goes to show that riveting plot elements can seemingly shorten even the Long-est chapters.

*Waits for nauseous groan to subside before proceeding to chapter sixteen.*

Author's Response:

no nauseous groans, just the usual enjoyment of your skill with puns. I guess I left myself open to loads of "long" puns, given the character's name.

Reviewer: surfergirl7 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2012 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 30: CLARK'S DARING DIVE

Such a fun story. I love it!

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Date: December 11 2012 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 12: WHATEVER HAPPENED TO NICKY?

Why is Casey like a Timex watch?

Because, he takes a giant licking and keeps on ticking. Ba-DUM-Boom!

Author's Response:

You're on a roll.... or roladex.

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Date: December 11 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 11: A SYMPATHETIC VIEWPOINT

Sorry; but, now I'm reminded of another old novelty song.

"Oh, it's Istanbul. Not Constantinople!
Yes, it's Istanbul. Not Constantinople!
Now, it's Istanbul. Not Constantinople
Have some Turkish delight, on a moonlit night."

Author's Response:

... and hope Lera doesn't accidentally bite.

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Date: December 11 2012 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 10: DOUBLE DATE, DOUBLE FATE

*Sigh!* When are autocratic hypocrites like Mosa finally going to realize that not even parents are exceptions to the rule that EVERYBODY HAS TO EARN RESPECT BEFORE GETTING IT?

Author's Response:

So true.

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Date: December 10 2012 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 9: GIANT COURTSHIP

Well! It looks like Mrs. Long is finally developing a conscience. Although, Rochelle strikes me as becoming a two-timing hussy. But, I approve of Lera being a gentle adult giantess.

Author's Response:

She feels that almost eating someone and dating someone else isn't a conflict of interest, but she could be wrong...

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Date: December 10 2012 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 8: GARDEN ODYSSEY

The most gigantic, perhaps. But, definitely not the Long-est.

;-D

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Date: December 10 2012 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 7: A SWIM BEFORE LUNCH

Heh! This particular cliff-hanger reminds me of a novelty song from the early 1960's. Something about "little Willy-Willy can't...go home."

Author's Response:

But is Cliff still hanging?

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Date: December 10 2012 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 6: PINEAPPLE TURNOVER

It's too bad Willy landed in the pineapples. If it had been diced gherkins, I could've said he was in a real pickle! But, somehow, I don't think you would've relished that joke.

Author's Response:

I caught and loved all the puns.

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Date: December 10 2012 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 5: THE COCKTAIL PARTY

Something tells me Willy is not "Long" for this world.

Author's Response:

"You'd be very surprised, Commissioner..."

Reviewer: surfergirl7 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 07 2012 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 4: BULLIES FOR YOU

Cool concept. I seriously like this story; romance and a meal. Will there be more?



Author's Response:

There are 48 chapters going up on giantessworld and two that are written only for my own amusement. I'll probably post one chapter a day, but more on weekdays if the reviews demand it.

There'll be variety and multiple plots as time goes on, but always a vore focus.

In fact, I liked your review of gobbling license so much that I sent you an email about this story. I'm glad you've already found it and tried a few chapters.

I'll be away for the weekend. So I might post two or three chapters now, to give you a bit more to (pardon the pun) whet your appetite.

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Date: December 06 2012 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 4: BULLIES FOR YOU

And, it's here that I have to wait to "devour" the next revived chapter.

;-)

Author's Response:

Or should I have said "Wee Willy snacky runs through the mouth..."?

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Date: December 06 2012 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 3: A PICNIC LUNCH

Uh-oh! It looks like Mrs. Long is going to have herself a little Willy.

;-)

Author's Response:

Willy in a filly.

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Date: December 06 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 2: A HOLIDAY TREAT

Yep! This is just how I remember it from the first go-round.

Author's Response:

Some of it will line up with the second go round too, but some won't.

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Date: December 06 2012 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 1: OUT OF BOUNDS

So far/so good.

Author's Response:

That's even true for the boys on Mrs Long's menu so far.

Reviewer: girlfood Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05 2012 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 2: A HOLIDAY TREAT

good to see you're adding the old story. i will be looking forward to the new additions



Author's Response:

Just a reshuffle for the better, but I hope fans old and new really get a kick out of it. I'm honoured that you're reading it again.

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