She definitely frightens me. I think of her as someone who's not quite as bad as Abby claims she is -- but as a good person who's been warped by her lifestyle, and her situation.

I've been trying to figure out the main difference between this story and Adela -- and the most important difference, I think, is that readers will find a hard time relating these characters to people in their own lives (i.e. teachers, friends, or in some cases even relatives). I'll just have to keep writing, though. I really hope this story won't die. It's better written than Adela, in any case. And the characters are much sharper in my mind. But I'm not sure how easy that important "relatedness" factor is going to be. Who can Chloe represent? Who can Abby? Or Emma? Does it matter? I'm still trying to find out, as I go deeper into the story.

And damn my typos too (I think I caught them all). I should do a full edit before I post next time. 

I also second your damning of Meredith. 

Thanks.

Or, if you think of it another way, the new guard vs. the old tricks. Quickly realized that the categories I used in the last story don't have any meaning here: whether one is good or bad, or gentle or sadistic, it all comes out the same in a "dystopian" NWO scenario. Giving your character bad motives, or making them deliberately evil, isn't necessary, because in a bad world they're bound to pick up some of the ingrained practices of that world. Discrepancies or deficiencies of character can be explained away by: but you didn't consider the times they lived in. 

Now, when applied to a NWO giantess story, that makes the relationships 10x more interesting, at least for me. Some writers on this site know what I'm talking about, but others go on plugging away at the violent/gentle categories without realizing they're both unnecessary and ridiculous in many situations. 

Yes, a lot of little parodies in the last chapter, and not only of my own stories. But also there's this to remember: while the eponymous character of my earlier story might have had a personal, intergenerational grudge against her mother, she later became a leader in the society itself. 

Thanks for the review.

Thanks, & I'm glad to be back. Hope the story lives up to your expectations.