[Report This]Date: October 24 2014 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story and the way it´s twisting and turning. As I already commited in the Review I wrote yesterday on your other Story (Theophobia), I absolutely love the way you take your time to describe things and how you go deep into the details of everything. Normal humen (the none GTS dudes) in your stories do not just appear to be killed of... they have personalities, their own purpose and you show that in an awesome way... I think that even if I weren´t into GTS stuff or anything involved with it I would still find your stories absolutely great. I will definately also read your other stories as well and I know already that I will devour them just like I did the ones I´ve already read.
According to me you are already a master of writing because I just love to read your stories and I could go on and on and on reading them... Personally I would have liked it if you would have described omewhere the basic looks of Aria... Haircolor, Eyes and so on... that way the readers mind can draw a better picture of your original intention about her looks. Here and there it would be great to read something mor about the victims... like a description of how an unlucky guy feels when her foot comes down on him, crushing his bones, forcing his guts out and so on. I love the way you always remember the guilt a GTS must feel and the way you try to explain why and how she´s capable to bring on the horror to people...
A master like you doesn´t need to get any clues on how to become better but I´d still like to point out the link to an old story to you and I´d ove for you to read it. The way the inner feelings of the GTS the way heer killing is justified and the gorescenes are awesome there... maybe you´ll like it. http://giantessworld.net/Stories6/island.htm
Oh... and before I forget... That thing she tried to to in the city where she wanted to have some anal action.... let her have some ;)
Thanx for writing such awesome Stories !!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, man! I've posted a much bigger response on DeviantArt. :)
Date: July 24 2013 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 14
Okay, I have to tell you, your story kept me awake for a whole night! O.O
I was incapable of stop reading it's.. it's wonderful!
One of the best fantasy GTS stories I ever read!
C'mon, don't be desperate! You're doing an AMAZING job.
The plot is nice and consistent and the sexual/slaughtering/dominant parts are simply wonderful!
I really love the "inner struggle" of the goddess and of the main charachters that are around her. It's something I always loved so much in a deadly giantess story that I used it even in my own stories.
Please don't stop writing this masterpiece, I promise that I will write a new comment every time you will release a new chapter. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for this wonderful review Tiny-Mk! As I've already responded on giantesscity, it's truly appreciated!
Date: July 12 2013 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well I love this story man, I loved it even when it was full-blown violent, and I tend to steer clear of that stuff...Though it's kinda growing on me.
Keep writting dude, this is definitely one of my favs at the moment.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it so much. :)
[Report This]Date: July 12 2013 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love Gentle Aria, however messed up she may still be. I still want her to get her ass kicked, she's an evil bitch, so I am kinda satisfided that she's a little threatened by Mae's words. But I get the feeling that Mae isn't a knight in shining armor either (and what a cunt for leaving Mase behind like that), so at least I welcome the bit of gentleness she displayed here. It's weird though, wasn't Aria supposed to be Omniscient? Can't she just read Mase's mind and get the information she wants that way? Ahh, whatever man I dont sweat the details.
Author's Response:
Man, you're like the only person commenting! Hehe.
Anyway, no, Aria is not omniscient. The little part where she says she is a few chapters ago is merely a sarcastic remark. She can't read minds. There is sort of a magic/technology system here, although not fully revealed so far, but Aria is no true god, just somebody with incredible powers.
Also, the way I got this planned out, I think you will like it, but it will surprise you. This story isn't really a back and white story, good vs evil, but lies more in the 'grey area', even though so far it's not really apparent. But I've only written about 35k words so far and I've got lots and lots planned, I only need the motivation :).
[Report This]Date: July 09 2013 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 13
OOOHHH SNNNAAPP!! Mae didn't seem to be acting like the gentle giantess she pretended to be, and that ending!? Anyway, Im little dissapointed that Mae's true self doesn't seem to be gentle, but thats just me, I love gentle.
Author's Response:
Mae's special, you'll see. And gentle parts are coming... I think. At least I'm bored with writing mindless repetitive violence, but then again, gentleness in my book might be something very violent for some one else. Anyway, time to read the new Silver Giantess chapters! :D
[Report This]Date: April 18 2013 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved every bit of this story and I wish you luck on whatever you have planned next.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Hopefully I've learned enough by writing Broken Sky to make my next story better written. I still feel like the prose is way too simple and I've made too many rookie mistakes.
[Report This]Date: April 17 2013 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 12
This is an excellent story! Its well made and has a lot of potential. count me in for any future additions to this series. Also are you planning on making a godzilla style showdown in one of the cities between Aria and Mae?
The only criticism I can think of is that there is a lot of big ideas presented here and that can potentially backfire.
Author's Response:
I plan do something like a Godzilla showdown, yes. But I'll think about it for a long time though. There are indeed a lot of big ideas presented, the main reason why I'm pausing with this because I don't want to rush it, but for most of them I've already got a resolution, just have to think how to fit this all in.
[Report This]Date: April 01 2013 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loving this series.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you do. Would be great if I got some criticism for this, it's my first story but I don't mind people marking out mistakes.
Date: March 31 2013 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
I see where you're coming from with there being so much to cover that time simply cannot allow for you to cover it all and also live your daily life. It has been a great story, and I (and many more) have really enjoyed the interesting twists and turns you put to it. Can't wait to read the final chapter!
Perhaps we will see another story from you?... hopefully one that doesn't grow too out of control for you?
Author's Response:
Well, I've made it a mission for me to write 100k words in 2013, so, I hope to fullfill it by writing GTS stories and leaving my footprint here. Expect a lot from me this year... I hope. :D
[Report This]Date: March 31 2013 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 11
This chapter was beautiful. Just beautiful.... I'm really enjoying your writing style...
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it so much.
[Report This]Date: March 30 2013 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Next chapter is the last huh? I hope you come to some sort of conclusion, its going to be tough to capture in writting. To me it doesn't look like anything is going to change in the end, shes just too damn powerful for anyone to fight back...She'll prolly continue doing as she pleases. Great story by the way, im glad you've gotten this far along.
Author's Response:
And I still am not done with this. As I've said on Amateur Wordsmith's review, I'll explain after I finish the last chapter.
[Report This]Date: March 30 2013 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 11
I am saddened to see this story end it really was quite a ride. anyways I really like what you did with this character I hope you make her revolution suceed perhaps have her go one an intergalactic killing spree against those who took over earth.
Look foward to reading more from you.
Author's Response:
The story isn't really ending here, it's just that I'm done with Broken Sky itself, the story about the end of a civilization. I'll explain myself a lot more on the end notes in the next, and last chapter.
[Report This]Date: March 26 2013 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 10
Man, I just read this from beginning to 10. You're doing it right, Aria is one of the most interesting characters I've come across in gts fiction. Find out more about her, I'm looking forward to the rest of this story.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the character, there's so many things that I still have to flesh out about her, so many hidden details and back-story etc. There's a lot of material to write about. Also, there are so many other characters that I've introduced... where do I begin?
Nevertheless, it's easy when you're doing it for fun. I wish I could find the time to write more often, especially since I've started this story more or less as a project on improving my writing skills.
[Report This]Date: February 10 2013 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
You have some excellent content here. Your character development is intriguing and layered without hindering the effectiveness of the destruction segments, which are tantalizingly realized and descriptive. There's a certain rawness to those scenes that I can't quite place; you capture the violence and brutality of the situations very well. Your psychological explorations are a lot of fun, too, and you do a nice job of playing off of whatever's going on action-wise in the tale at that point in a way that lets the reader connect with the giantess' psyche while still regarding her as villainous. Keep it up.
Author's Response:
Well, that's a damn good review I would say! It's great to have such a positive review from one of the best writers around here, thanks jacksmith!
Date: February 10 2013 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is an excelent story I love your use of descriptive language and the city destruction was... well amazing
Author's Response:
Thanks, I hope to continue with some city-destruction scenes in a few chapters.
Date: February 08 2013 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent work on Chapter 8! I really like how things went! Love how you left things unanswered at the end of it all. It makes the next chapter almost unbearable to wait for!
Author's Response:
There's a lot more to reveal, it's just that I have to think hard about how to do so and keep the integrity of the story intact because afterall this is a GTS story and GTS interaction is the primary theme here. It's definitely a lot harder to write a GTS story with a plot.
Unfortunately, I have some important exams coming up and I'm not sure if I'll be able to update this until March...
[Report This]Date: February 07 2013 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really dont know where your going with this story but I gotta say I love the mysteries behind Aria and her powers..And the fact that the story reveals them in tidbits over time. Aria is a great character and I love learning about her backstory even at the expense of the sexy stuff! This is a great and well thought-out story, definitely on of my favorites.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the story part too. :)
Date: February 01 2013 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great! Grildrigian!
Author's Response:
I'm humbled to be compared to the great Scott Grildrig! Thank You! :)
Date: February 01 2013 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
The plot is getting deeper and you're improving with the writing, which is nice. It keeps the story very interesting. However, don't forget that you still need to include some "sexy stuff" here and there when you decide to jump into the real meat and potatoes of your story. I know it can be difficult to do so, especially when there is so much to cover, but just keep in mind that this is a website for GIANTESS stories.
I admit, I am a very "encounter-loving" reader when it comes to the stories on this site. I get the biggest thrill when there is giantess interaction, detailed scenes, micro-level scenarios, etc. That's obvious from my older reviews. However, I just wanted to share with you MY opinions/suggestions. My intention was everything but to be mean and unhelpful!
Author's Response:
Thanks again. Of course I understand that those stories need to be Giantess stories, but I find it hard to restrain myself from babbling about the story part too much, I still want everything to make sense and I'm still on the process of learning how to write, so sometimes when I write a chapter, it gets so big that I decide to cut the story and the sexy stuff part in two pieces, like this one. So, I guess there are going to be chapters in the future where I'll write just to move the story along, but still most chapters are going to be about Giantess interaction. Maybe I just need to write longer chapters, so it includes both.
Also don't worry about being unhelpful or anything lol! I find it that you learn the most from constructive criticism, something which is apparently lacking here. Other than from you and a few others, I don't seem to get many reviews compared to other stories here, even though judging by the read count its popular enough I guess. I still don't know how people feel about this. But oh well, as long as I have the time, I'll write.
Also, thanks for the suggestions! I'll keep them in mind. :)
Date: January 22 2013 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love the new chapter. I like how in the story you keep her "toys" at micro size. I don't really have any suggestions for the actual plot of the story. I think that that is going very well. However, I would love to see more detailed singled-out, or one on one scenes with the goddess and one of her captives. I can't speak for others, but personally I love when the focus is on the tinies, and how she humiliates them.
I.e., smearing them into her pussy, sucking them off her fingers, and or both... sprinkling them on her body, etc.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review again! Actually, I was now going for a more personal touch now, singled-out scenarios as you say. The giantess will get to know some of them more personally, they will have names etc. Right now, I'm writing the plot that leads to it, so that it makes sense in the end. To be honest, the plot is my primary focus, I just want to learn how to write and I can't do that by just writing about giantess interaction.