[Report This]Date: December 08 2012 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 8: Insanity Proposal
As always I've really enjoyed your writing style an dialog in this story but I just can't seem to get past the fact that the girls are so young. But at the same time this is your story an I'm glad you posted it. Also love his size, 2" is my all-time favorites size for a shrunken tiny.
aaron
[Report This]Date: December 08 2012 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
wht time frame is this for him past or present? Cause I know its changes in this story. Is this the summer before he escapes his familys prison?
Author's Response:
yes, this is the summer before he leaves for college
[Report This]Date: December 07 2012 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 7: Infidelity
the way u described her smelly feet almost seemed like the better choice. The one thing I like about your male characters the most is that I always hope the best for them. Thats why I loved the blackmailing series, after yrs of slavery something good finally comes. Stories about torture that leads to more torture never connect with me. I don't care wht anyone thinks this is a great story.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review! i like stories that have some kind of payoff for all the torture, too, so i often go for that scenario, although this particular character may still yet have some trials to go through
[Report This]Date: December 06 2012 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 7: Infidelity
Another great chapter! I'm liking this character Janie, I wonder if she will return him or if Maggie will figure it out and come retrieve her toy. Curious to see if Gabby gets her hands on him too.
Date: December 06 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 6: Unnecessary Roughness
Love love love the ol kidnapped scenario, you really do craft excellent stories. Always great characters and believable dialogue. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
thanks for the review!
Date: December 05 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
I was honestly unaware that I was downgrading you. I have been posting from a source other than my desktop, so there is a possibility that I'm not seeing everything. I have seen #8 as the hightest on my phone. This is my faul if I screwed up. I'll cease posting point scores until I am back in my home and can see everything.
Author's Response:
fair enough. and again i do see where you're coming from on the point you made. i'm pretty sure the next story, which will do sort of what Blackmail 3 did by jumping forward some years, will put your concerns to rest
[Report This]Date: December 05 2012 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
Just so that there's no misunderstanding, I have always apprciated your work here. I think you are immensely talented and this place is exponentially better with your contributions. Your sibling/mother/son stories are phenomenal and need to continue on! I may annoy some here, but find incest-themed gts stories, particularly those that included foot domination, awesome. The intimacly of the relationships make the femdom stuff all the more cruel and humiliating. Again, my only "complaint" is that it's difficult for me to erotically enjoy stories that use characters that are only 1-2 years above twelve years of age. If this site was just for sci-fi stories that happened to include a giantess 13-14 year old, that's cool. The hangup me and a few others have (and it's not a condemnation) is to include femdom-stuff featuring a youngster on a site that is fetish-origented. To be blunt, folks flap it to the stories here. Personally, I enjoyed Parts 2-3 of A Little Blackmail much more than the opening chapter due to Carly's age. However, don't beat yourself up or anything. You know my intention and where I'm coming from, so keep up your great work. I also hope the next part of this tale eventually includes Judy really using her pungent feet to crush his self-worth!
Author's Response:
valid points; i'm perfectly aware of what this site means to many people. at the same time, i will point out that you've already taken a look at the story in the earlier chapters and decided the subject matter was not for you, so i suppose i'm not entirely sure why you're giving it a lower rating again when you were already aware it was not a subject you agree with because of the ages. again though i will respect your opinion. the next story in this series will do sort of what Blackmail 3 did and jump forward far enough that hopefully most people's issues with age will be quelled
[Report This]Date: December 05 2012 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
I hadnt read this series until just the past few days when i got current on everything . I have to say its pretty enjoyable and just what i would expect from you and your normally high level of fiction writing.
As for the story not being popular, it seems quite the opposite to me. The other point brought up was the age. There seems to be a vocal minority who comment about age of characters. As i see those comments from time to time but it doesnt seem to actually effect readership or popularity.
Either way this story is a good read, Im personally hoping for another blackmail story to see what happened to carly or another toy teacher chapter after you finish this.
Author's Response:
thanks for sharing, asuka; i'm glad you've enjoyed the stories of this little series. more than likely, i'd contribute something to toy teacher before putting out the next blackmail story, as part of me feels like i ought to complete one of the several stories i have unfinished before moving on, but it mostly depends on responses i get
Date: December 05 2012 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 5: Alone in the Dark
I don't see exactly what you mean concerning the ages of the characters with this story. I understand that some people are opponent to an erotica where the characters are 13 and 18 but the first 2 stories in the Blackmail series have Carly at 14 and Jack at 17 as you know (of course). Besides while I'm not sure if there are rules on this website against this but if there are not it's your story so I feel you should write what you want to write about. If that means erotic stuff in this story's setting then I would support you.
Author's Response:
i certainly appreciate your support and the review. in reality, from the beginning i had no plans to include explicit sexual content in the story; i think that people were more off-put by the fact that there was foot interaction in a story on a site that often caters to foot fetishists, making it at least somewhat sexual in nature. the age thing hadn't much occurred to me until recently, and it's something i'm going to be reconsidering in future installments of stories
[Report This]Date: December 04 2012 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 5: Alone in the Dark
Things definitely picked up in this chapter. I'm a big fan of this scenario, and I like the parellels it can draw to the The Club chapter.
Also if I could cast my vote to a series to continue, it would have been the Love Games, but sadly that was concluded in the most spectacular ending ever. It's hard to pick a favorite because you have so many kinky stories but maybe there's a hidden trial in there that Amanda may have been ommitted. :P
My plan B vote is for MTO2: The Club, and maybe Susan takes things a bit too far and stomps his balls too hard...
Anyway, I'm always happy to see what you've concocted in every new chapter you upload. And don't concern yourself with nay sayers, you've made dedicated fans in the darkest of places!
Keep on rockin'
Author's Response:
thanks much for the review/rating! i enjoyed writing love games, but the impression i got from readers was that the violence was a tad much, so i curttailed that one a little sooner, although it could've certainly gone on if there was interest; i had plenty of ideas. i'm not quite sure what more I could specifically do with MTO2 since i consider it finished, although i do have plans for the 5th one that would see the return of several characters (and possibly Susan)
[Report This]Date: December 04 2012 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
Sorry, for got to leave a rating...
Date: December 04 2012 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
This is definently becoming interseting! Its a fun read :)
I can't help but feel a strong connection to the ALB series.
What do you plan on working on after this short story is done?
Author's Response:
thanks for reviewing! the ALB connection is definitely there since it's a gts scenario i really enjoy, but hopefully i've made it different enough to be distinguished. my plan is to add more to either Freshman, Julia, or Toy Teacher, depending on where the interest is.
Date: December 04 2012 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 5: Alone in the Dark
I'm sorry to hear that this story isn't getting as much positive comments as you would like because this is my favorite story you've writtern outside of the "A Little Blackmail" series and I was hoping for it to be quite lengthy. I really like the dialog of chapter 4 and I wish you would write like that more often.
Author's Response:
thanks for reading and reviewing. part of the desire to move onward sooner rather than later for this story is just the iffy subject matter considering the ages of the characters that some readers have, but soon i'll bring it back several years later on in the timeline to avoid controversy, so to speak. i'm not entirely sure what it is you mean by "like that" of the dialogue in chapter 4
[Report This]Date: December 03 2012 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 5: Alone in the Dark
You have 12 reviews and five stars and you think this story isn't well liked?? How could it be anymore liked? Is there a sixth star hiding somewhere?
I love the power reversal in this story and the fact that you utilize exposition but don't let it get in the way of the plot. Heck I logged on just to rate this thing and I almost never log on. What does that tell you?
Moreover, I love that someone has finally done an in-shoe sports related story. This is a personal favorite of mine and so help me, jack, if you quit on us now I will never forgive you :-P
Author's Response:
thanks for logging on for the review; i'm glad you've enjoyed it thus far! the in-shoe sports concept is a fun one for me too, although the way things are going it may need to be delayed until a different story since i'm trying to wrap this one soon. i intend to bring that concept back later on in the series though since it is a favorite of mine as well.
Date: December 03 2012 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 5: Alone in the Dark
I do like the way you describe the way he's forced to worship his sisters feet, I like all the detail, especially the color and shape of her toes
Author's Response:
thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response:
thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: December 03 2012 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 5: Alone in the Dark
I'm liking it. Your writing is always great and I love the dynamics in the family: Poor abused Scott and his Mother that is obviously a bit out there, his sister now getting into the act. Your story so take it in the direction you feel the need to, but I'm enjoying immensely!
Author's Response:
thanks for the rating/review! definitely a major factor of this one for me to was to "pass on" the mantle of darkly whacky family dynamics from mother to daughter, although certainly the mother isn't done with her fun by a long shot
Date: December 03 2012 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 5: Alone in the Dark
Imho the story is just as good s the previous episodes, both in the story itself and how it's written. 'nuff said.
Re the sister thing, I'm quite perplexed.
Myself, I don't like the idea -- it's the very reason why I din't read the blackmail series, and by "didn't read" I don't mean "read without commenting", or "read and complained afterwards": I just din't want to read it, so I didn't.
Yet this story is not really disturbing to me(*): they haven't done anything disgusting, you wrote they wouldn't (I trust you on that!), and I can't really imagine the story making any sense using a neighbor/friend/schoolmate/whatever(*), at the _very_ least because the beginning would become absurd; and as long as the story is good enough that
- I don't know what's going to happen next ("it wasn't Maggie")
- Reading it N times is always a pleasure
I guess I can just stay focused on what's happening rather than who Maggie is.
But maybe it's just me.
PS
When you finish this story and move to something else, please consider moving to "Mommy's Time-out 5".
(*) other than the "big/little brother", but nvm
(**) Where's his girlfriend from the 1st episode btw?
Author's Response:
I may take a break from the series before moving onto the 5th iteration, but it'll definitely be back since the short episodes don't take long to write, and as it happens my plan was to bring his girlfriend back from the first story to participate in the fun again. thanks for reviewing/sharing your thoughts
Date: December 03 2012 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
So this issue is coming more and more frequently as I get older. When I first started writing, I was 14, and when I first started reading, I was 12 or 13. Gradually, I realized that my characters, who were aged according to my current age, were not getting any older as I aged. Soon, the question of approrpiatness started coming to mind.
What I decided was that there is a limit. As long as this is a sibling relationship, and the siblings are of a certain distance, and that neither side is getting any real sexual enjoyment out of it - then it's okay. If Carly, for example, was 13 and doing the things she did in A Little Blackmail 3, then there would be a problem.
Currently, I find this cute in a playful type of way, and though this IS fetish material (mostly stuff I don't have to worry about as I just turned 18) then it's okay as long as there is a threshhold.
I know the reason you chose this age is that there are certain immaturities that allow for scenarios that just won't fly when the character is 20-something. By that point, a girl wouldn't TEASE under her feet, there would be something... Else, in there.
However, in the interests of the masses (no pun intended,) perhaps you should increase the future ages of your characters. You don't HAVE to, but just realize that you're alienating a few people who might feel uncomfortable as they get older.
Author's Response:
I understand exactly what you're getting at. My situation of reading/writing stories over time mirrors yours pretty closely. I wanted the immaturity of the character that simply wouldn't work in a character in their twenties without making it overtly sexual. You are correct in that this story is going much less for sexualization despite the obvious fetish overtones, and instead is meant to come off in that playful almost-but-not-quite-provocative way, but there are still people who prefer not to have to mentally separate it. In my future stuff, the characters are definitely going to be older, or at least in a range more acceptable to everyone. Thanks for your thoughts.
[Report This]Date: December 01 2012 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
People seem to be forgetting that the stories on here are fiction.
Please continue to write about the themes that interest you without worry to the sensibilities of others, there are plenty of other things written/drawn/etc every day that will appeal to every taste.
Really great story as usual. I love how the sister acts at the end of chapter 2.
Author's Response:
thanks for reviewing. i'm glad you got what i was going for. certainly, i'm aware that this is tricky ground i'm treading on here, so i try to make sure what i write won't offend anyone, but sometimes it can't be helped i guess.
[Report This]Date: December 01 2012 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 2: Lesser of Two Evils
Maggie and Carly seem very similar. This story is shaping up to be a good one. The underage sex scenes might cause a problem with some readers. Anyways, I'm sure there are plenty of torture scenes you can come up with. Great chapter as always.
Author's Response:
thanks for reviewing. in many ways, yes, they are similar. eventually, you'll start to see that maggie's just a little immature but deep down cares for her brother, unlike the much more insane carly. as i've said, there will be zero sex scenes in this story, so hopefully that will help calm people down. hope you like what's coming up with