[Report This]Date: July 31 2013 6:19 PM Title: The Truth comes Out
High schools always seem to have status-conscious harpies like Rachel among the female students. And, their male counterparts are (arguably) worse!
Author's Response: Harpy? Let me google that....... Ohhhhh, I get you now. Your comment just made alot more sense to me. You're right as well!
[Report This]Date: July 31 2013 1:57 PM Title: Family
Well, I guess he can kiss his birthday wish, of going to regular school, good-bye.
Thanks for finally updating. If I could rate this eleven points, just for that, I would do so. :-D
[Report This]Date: July 31 2013 9:35 AM Title: Family
I do not know why I haven't read this story its great. I wonder when the wiolence will start and if they will survive it. Great story.
[Report This]Date: February 19 2013 1:36 PM Title: Bianca and Rachel
Well, this is going to be an interesting family reunion.
[Report This]Date: December 02 2012 11:14 AM Title: Morning
SECOND!!
Okay, now that I've got that out of my system: your story may not be very far along. But, in my book, it is already a rarity for this sub-genre. Not only for having _two_ mini-men as protagonists. But, also, for having an older sister who's merely indifferent and self-involved (as is typical of most teenage girls in real-world high schools) rather than an incestuous sadist. So, rest assured, I will most definitely be tuning into chapter 4 to meet Bianca! :-)
Author's Response: You'll never expect what happens in the next chapter.
Date: December 01 2012 4:59 PM Title: Morning
I can't wait ti meet Bianca. So I assume he is going to school then? I hate cliffhangers.
Author's Response: I'm writing the next chapter as we speak.
Date: December 01 2012 4:56 PM Title: Happy Birthday!
You're writing ability is certainly getting better. A nice chapter by the way. Have you read any of the guides in the "writing tools" section of giantessworld?
[Report This]Date: November 30 2012 12:08 PM Title: Happy Birthday!
Well, at least he won't be able to gab on it while driving. Connecticut has two laws against that kind of thing. And, I _still_ see motorists openly breaking them!
Date: November 30 2012 12:32 AM Title: Introduction
Sweet, another update! Can't wait for the next chapter to come out!
[Report This]Date: November 29 2012 11:12 PM Title: Introduction
It's not bad. This is probably some of the better writing you've done, so you're definitely improving, and you actually seem to be making an effort to distance yourself from a pretty well-worn genre. Mainly I'd say try to clean up technical errors to make it easier to read and keep working at characterization. You're making good progress.
[Report This]Date: November 29 2012 11:00 PM Title: Happy Birthday!
When I read the title I thought that this was a Freshmen ripoff. But I read it and it is a ok story so far.
[Report This]Date: November 29 2012 10:25 PM Title: Happy Birthday!
Wow that was probably your best chapter yet. very well written and very clear. Jazzmines character said (waa) I guess u meant (was).
Im not a spelling nazi though so I didn't care lol. Whats next
[Report This]Date: November 29 2012 10:08 PM Title: Introduction
its ok i like the sister character alot
Date: November 29 2012 1:43 PM Title: Introduction
I really good start. I hope he will be ok at school!
[Report This]Date: November 29 2012 11:44 AM Title: Introduction
Wait a minute. How can Jack be Michaels twin if he was born 4 later?
Date: November 29 2012 7:25 AM Title: Introduction
Nice.and the characters are very similar the ones in the story im making right now.
Date: November 29 2012 5:01 AM Title: Introduction
This is a favorite scenario of mine to read -- the natirally tiny person trying to live a semi-normal life. Lots of potential. I also like that there are two tiny brothers. That should give this a slightly different spin than other similar stories.
Date: November 29 2012 12:30 AM Title: Introduction
2 tines! very different. its been awhile since u last posted
Author's Response: Yeah, school has really messed up my schedule. And I made the 2 tinies because I didn't want the protagonist (Micheal) to be alone in a world of giants.
Date: November 29 2012 12:30 AM Title: Introduction
2 tines! very different. its been awhile since u last posted
Date: November 29 2012 12:21 AM Title: Introduction
FIRST!!! All joking aside, I am a big fan of most of your work and hope that this story is continued. I really like the fact that you have two characters at that size so that the main character has someone that is just like him. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: "Thank you, and I'm very fond of your work as well. "Randall" is coming out to be a very good story. Keep it up. P.s. I like how you clearly described your characters, but "weaved" it into the story. Good job.